Reviews for Broken Arrow
Guest chapter 33 . 8/27
Really good writing...easy to follow...even if i didnt agree with how edward and bella got together is was a good story.
Guest chapter 29 . 8/27
Geez 5 days? Hos many times have him and Bella had sex? He says he loved kte and gets all emotional about her? I call bull
Guest chapter 19 . 8/27
Of course jasper and emmett are taking over...he just keeps having sex
Guest chapter 18 . 8/27
So this assasin hears that something is gojng on downstairs and doesnt get up to investigate whats gojng on? Instead he has a piece of ass...this isnt believable...great writing and i feel like im there watching a movie but at parts like that im booing
Guest chapter 17 . 8/27
Sick
Guest chapter 16 . 8/27
I dont think him and bella are taking things seriously...after she left they just go and have sex...selfish assholes
Guest chapter 15 . 8/27
Okay i liked where this story was going but come on...edward seemed like an okay guy or was becoming an okay guy but this is just sick. He let a teenager control him...hes pathetic and she is just stupid
Guest chapter 13 . 8/27
Oh geezo...his girlfriend or whatever that he says he loved was just killed
Guest chapter 11 . 8/27
Im surprised at her is acting her age...edward should keep her at a distance. How freaking inappropriate
Djejdjdjendkd chapter 20 . 10/7/2017
I can’t believe I never found this story before! It’s wonderful! Your writing is amazing! Thank u!
BRENDA WARREN chapter 33 . 4/12/2017
YES YOU LEFT AN OPENING FOR A SEQUEL WITCH I HOPE YOU DECIDE TO WRITE LATER ON. I LOVED THE STORY LEFT ME WANTING MORE BUT ONE CAN ALWAYS HOPE FOR MORE THANK YOU I LOVED IT.
BRENDA WRREN chapter 32 . 4/12/2017
HAPPY BIRTHDAY WELL FIRST PRESENT IS HES GOING TO BE A DAD THAT GREAT.
BRENDA WARREN chapter 31 . 4/12/2017
SO ALICE IS GETTING MARRRIED AND EDWARDS ON HIS WAY TO SEE BELLA GREAT THEY NEED TIME TOGETHER.
BRENDA WARREN chapter 30 . 4/11/2017
IS HE GOING TO GET ANY TIME WITH BELLA NOW?
BRENDAA WARREN chapter 29 . 4/11/2017
WHY CANT THERE BE PEACE AND NO FIGHTING IS THAT ASKIIG TO MUCH?
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