Reviews for On the Line
hooker81 chapter 2 . 5/1/2012
Poor Bella.
Bee1982 chapter 2 . 5/1/2012
Loving this Liz :) Can't wait for more!
NeeNee246 chapter 2 . 5/1/2012
This is so fantastic! I definitely love this already! :)
teamswitzerlandmom chapter 2 . 5/1/2012
You have delivered another great chapter. The heartache that Bella is experiencing is palpable in the chapters and brings tears to my eyes.

Thanks for writing,

djsmommie chapter 2 . 5/1/2012
More more more!

I love it

can't wait for Edward and his backstory!
teamswitzerlandmom chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Great start and I'm looking forward to more.
toocute24 chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Yeah, angsty was right! You already have me in tears! Lol

No one should have to go through that. :(

Great start though! I can't wait to see where it goes from here!
vodkavamp76 chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Wasn't expecting the first chapter so soon. You're just too good at this writing thing. Love it, great start to the new fic and I'm looking forward to seeing Bella's road to recovery along with Soldierward making an appearance. Think you got the tone of this one just right.

Much love

Lou xxx
djsmommie chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Oh such a good start I cannot wait for more!
NeeNee246 chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
This is a fantastic start! I am very excited for more! :)
Carlaisabel chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
update soon
LADARTHA chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
I think you have a good start to an excellent storyline. Looking forward to more.
amwine chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
I feel so bad for Bella. She has been through something so terrible and at such a young age, and it doesn't sound like she is done yet. I don't blame her for needing a new start. I am glad she has Alice and now Rose for support. I can't wait for more! Great job...thanks!
ScandalOlitz4Ever chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Heyy loving the nee story already :) Can't wait to read more :))
ERCommandoTwilight chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
I look forward to reading more. Thank you for writin and best wishes as you continue with this story.
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