|Reviews for Torn Asunder: The Story of the End of the World|
| Midnight Angels chapter 4 . 7/1/2012
I'm still not sure what's happening here...how did all this get so bad so quickly? DD and the Order are acting worse than the DEs. Is DD crazy in this story or just evil?
| ShadowBasilisk chapter 4 . 6/23/2012
fails to grab my attention. the trick to writing good HP fics is to have the story written in somewhat the same style and feel, sadly this fic doesn't hit the mark.
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/6/2012
This has potential. I like your detail work on the Wizengamot which I can actually believe to have happened. It feels real.