|Reviews for The Right Track|
| 20000 WPM chapter 1 . 8/3/2014
Lovely story. Wish there was more.
| EccentricFox chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
muuuuch too short. Needs a sequel, definitely!
I really liked it. Cute and quirky and different. But definitely needs more :P
| EmrysTheMerlin chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
Very nicely done.
| aroraCrow55 chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
thank you I am really stressed due to moving and this just made me feel so much better.
| HavenCraze chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
That was such an amazing story. I really loved it :)
| Sinfully Addicted chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
That was AMAZING! I really enjoyed reading that story. I like reading stories that go into detail for their sex scenes but you did a great job the way you wrote it. I don't know what else to say but some of the best stories I've ever read seem to take place on a train, why is that? What was your inspiration for this story?
Thanks for a great read. :)
| hippysheep chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
what the universe conspired )
| carrot341 chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Holy shit. I think i just made you my god. I bow to thee for i am not worthy!
| Sharon T chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
| hpgirl4ever chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Aww, great story! D
| MissGoldie chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
This was just really, really lovely, all the way through.
| blahblahblah17 chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
This was really fun to read, a great story!
| a-wonderful-afterlife chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Oh wow. So sweet and tender. This was such a lovely read and I couldn't stop until I'd finished. (I only recognised Mr K when he started spouting riddles!)
It would be great if you could do a second chapter/sequel for it, possibly something with more of a focus on Arthur and his situation, like how we followed Merlin here, but it is wonderful as it.
Time to stalk your profile for other writings, me thinks :)
| Crystal Mystery chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
This was so beautiful, I enjoyed it so much, it made my train drive that much more enjoyable. :)
| Artifistic chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
So cute! I really loved this story. It seems like you only planned to do this much, but any chance you’re going to write more chapters?