|Reviews for Mirrored|
| Guest chapter 41 . 3/2/2015
XD "why dont we eat it?" X'D omg
| Dawn-of-the-Akatsuki14 chapter 43 . 9/8/2012
I really like this story! I can't believe that it's almost over! :( Also, I am a fan of Homestuck too! :) If you want, I can try to answer any Homestuck questions you may have while reading it because some parts are really confusing. Just message me! I hope you have fun reading it! And again, this story is awesome! :D
| WinnieTheFatPooh chapter 40 . 8/2/2012
40 Chapters, dudette! This is awezome *o* it's amazing how you managed to still write that much when you have another story to write!
The fight over the camera was hilarious XD And I love how scared they are of Konan. Like a child viewing his mother as the monster of their nightmares XD
HISAKA'S WEAKNESS ARE BLUE HAIRED BEAUTIFUL WOMEN?! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA (earthquake) That caught me off guard XD
That dog gnawing at Kisame's leg...the mental image made me laugh to death. I don't know why, but I have a funny thing for dogs. I always cackle when they are involved in something XD. That explains where Zorba came from XD
I KNOW EXACTLY ABOUT THOSE IDIOTIC GUYS TELLING YOU CRAP IN THE INTERNET! I used to play an online dancing game (Alaplaya Audition, pretty fun until I got into FanFiction and stopped playing) and in that game, until you reach a certain level, you were supposed to get a boyfriend and try to gain money for a wedding. The guy wanted to fucking meet me... I had a strong urge to just go all 'dude, this is a game, not online dating' on him but refrained. You have to admit, it's feels nice when they tell you all of the sweet mushy things like 'love you'. It makes you feel beautiful X'D. (good thing he didn't know how I really looked XD)
AND NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Thinking that thhis story is about to reach it's end makes my face look like this- D:
| Guest chapter 40 . 8/2/2012
I just love this! And lifeless doll! Theyre both do funny! Haha! Go Pein! ...I don't have very much to write... Oh well! Just keep up the good work!
| TheBaga chapter 34 . 7/28/2012
Ha ha ha, veggies are her weakness. That made me smile. :) Reminds me of my older sister. She still hates veggies. XD 'The horror!'
| WinnieTheFatPooh chapter 36 . 7/25/2012
Have this thought ever crossed your mind? That Hidan's skeleton/grim reaper form makes him look like a panda? O.o
Lol Tobi XD Thinking it was Konan when he was hugging the shit out of Pein. And Sasori was hilarious XD Poor him for never having some peace and quiet time...(I know how that feels, having three banshees as siblings. They never shut up...)
Hisaka be one awesome dude! (not mentioning the neat and curly letters at chapter 26...XD)
It's 3:03 AM right now . I'm so fucking tired (because of my bro fucking up his rooms with toys everywhere, and I had to fucking clean it up! Being a girl is unfair!)
Favorite part: ''However, that blissful moment shattered when a horiible and loud noise ringed in his ears.''
| WinnieTheFatPooh chapter 35 . 7/25/2012
Hisaka's being awesome :o I love fire Jutsus like that. Typical Hidan and Kakuzu to argue in the middle of a fight XD
Omg, I couldn't stop laughing at Dei's ''WHAT DID YOU SAY, UN?'' Love how Sasori put tape around his mouth to shut him up XD
Zetsu and Tobi hiding under the bed from the 'magically flying fire' XD
Omg, another reason to say that you're just like me. I HATE that all we get from the world is city crap and Wash the Dishes chores and shopping. Living before technology was born would be awesome...
And here is reason number two: I too isolate myself...mostly because I'm sick of what people do these days, so I just go to my room, daydream, think, sleep, write, watch or draw. But the problem is, my family won't leave me alone! :U Saying it's bad if you keep isolating youself like that, or deciding that it's Family Activity Time (which is to sit down in the livingroom, watching commercials and commenting about them. Wtf...)
Favorite part : ''WHAT DID YOU SAY, UN?''
| WinnieTheFatPooh chapter 34 . 7/25/2012
I'm extremely sorry for the late review(s) here. And, as I decided from now on, I WILL review every chapter of this and Lifeless Doll, even if I'm late. So here's reviews about chapter 34, 35, and 36 ;D (this one's about 34)
NOOOOOOOOO Reiko died DX But it was funny with those vegetables thrown at her XD
LOL Deidara the Old Man XD Funny how he couldn't hear Sasori XD Sasori should be glad Kakuzu doesn't have hearing problems.
Speaking of that, who can believe that Kakuzu is 91 years old? I mean come on, he's fuckin' hot! :U and he can fight and move without cracking his back (while I, a teenage, can't even get my azz off of my bed without complaining about being tired)
FINALLY SOMEONE THAT HATES DISNEY FOR THE HORRIBLE CRIME THEY DID! I almost cried! Though Black Cat is my favorite Marvel character.
And from now on, I'll be writing my favorite part of the chapter at the end of every one of my reviews.
Favorite part : ''The girl was screaming 'the horror!' whenever he'd throw a broccoli in her mouth.''
PS: Broccoli is my worst nightmare. Along with okra and garlic. Eurgh...
| Guest chapter 31 . 7/10/2012
Uh, one question- how the hell is Tobi so related to Zetsu that they were paired up together? (TOBI TOBI, NOT MADARA TOBI) sorry you the meanness in this review. I'm just asking. :3 Always be happy Sal
| WinnieTheFatPooh chapter 33 . 7/6/2012
OMG Sorry for not reviewing this chapter earlier! I just noticed I hadn't reviewed it o.o Please forgive me D:
I love how Hisaka was all like ''I should help her, she's in pain.'' But then he turned all like ''Nah, I'm not in the mood.'' XD
That scene with the skeletons and the image of blood from eyeholes scared me to death. I wonder how you make your writing so graphic. Like, when I read this, I can see everything happening like I'm watching a movie. Not every story is like this. Really, your actually very talented at describing scenes and fights. Even if it might be hard to write them (it takes me hours) they end up being really good and entertaining to read. KEEP ON GOING LIKE THIS! It'z awezome è,é
I love how Hidan took Kakuzu's silence and stillness as an opportunity to punch him XD
:O NO! THEY CAN'T DIE! I'll die with them D: (even though I already died when they died in the manga/anime.) But seriously! Don't die on us again DX Their death caused me too much pain...Especially Hidan and Kakuzu's q_q
That scene between Zetsu and Tobi...Girl, your killing me...My face hurt from grinning so much :I (you see that smiley? It was supposed to be a ':(' but the smile is still there and hindering the frown! So it turned to a line. A battle between frown and smile...) Lol XD
But seriously! It was breathtaking...So so so so so so SO amazing. I love the way you make them so sweet! That's what I like about Yaoi :D (Sweet boys, every girl's hunting point XD). Really, I can't wait to see the Romance scenes that you will write for the others! :D
And DON'T YOU SAY THAT YOU FAIL AT ROMANCE DX You own. Totally. You don't need to practise because you were born a Romance genius. And a big YES! to the kissing scenes for Tobi, Zetsu, Konan and Pein *-* I can't wait D:
| feathered moon wings chapter 26 . 7/5/2012
Why! Why! How could you do this to me! Pfff... anyway -.-
... I think I'll just make a shity review...
Loved FDeidara blah blah... not cool him being childish in another persons home but justified just as you said blah blah Chears -.-
| feathered moon wings chapter 25 . 7/5/2012
NOOO! Pleas n yaoi! D,: Any way, I liked the chapter! Don't say is not "One of the best"
I think my dreams didn't came true u.u oh well.
But poor tobi but Kakazu is right -.- his mental...
Aaaa, I love the way Deidara solves things, don't you? Exploting every thing and every one n.n
But it was weird... why was Konan there?
| feathered moon wings chapter 24 . 7/5/2012
Oh, god lord... Hidan is sure going to kill him... and it's going to be REALLY painful...
Well, now that every thing makes sence, we ca know that the Akatsuki gots a terribl good team work. For planing all that sh*t just to make them work... gess...
I hope something bad hapens to Deidara O.O I love when bad things happen to my favorite characters (Have I mention it?) But why didn't he act all ninja and stuf if he sensed her and heard the sound?
| feathered moon wings chapter 23 . 7/5/2012
Okey. First, let me apologe. I really had no time for reading, so, sorry u.u BUT... here I am now!
An now... WHAT THE FU*K? Where they REALLY acting all this up? Whats the meaning of this? (It's stupid to ask because there is a chapter ahed so )
But I really liked that they worked together. Just like in a movie *o*
I'll keep reading so... no large coment
| WinnieTheFatPooh chapter 32 . 6/28/2012
THAT POSSESSED CANDY IS BADASS :D Love how it exploded and sent them flying to to the wall...TWICE XD
Poor Hisaka having to get Tobi's Ultimate Killer Hug performed on him :o I love his and Zetsu's reactions when Tobi summoned those cats and that sword XD
I think I fainted for a moment when I read the last part...
That fluff was the fluff of my dreams. I swear. I have been looking for a fluff like this for ages. AND NOW! I GOT IT! With ZetTobi no less! (It's very rare to find such a nice fluff, and ZetTobi itself kind of hard to find a good fic of.) THANK YOU!
AND HOW DARE YOU SAY YOUR NOT GOOD AT WRITING ROMANCE D: That fluff made my life. Really. I can't wait for the kiss scene.
And yet again, THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME FLUFF!