|Reviews for Aphelion|
| Guest chapter 52 . 3/8
Just curious...is Homeworld Command/Stargate Command/offworld operations primarily run by the USAF? I dont recall any USN or USCG operated starships or US Army/USMC run offworld sites/bases/city ships. Just curious. Seems natural for USCG to run a moon base or near earth operations.
As always, great writing!
| guest008 chapter 25 . 2/26
The Marshall plan was in 1924, and was before the second world war but after the first world war. The general idea of the Marshall plan was to give out loans to help rebuild Germany whose economy was failing. This idea of giving loans to help rebuild other economies is correct. Otherwise this chapter is very well done just like all those before it.
| Major Simi chapter 52 . 2/22
Well sometimes old enemy s become new allies , great idea very interesting. Well dine, keep going
| Jake chapter 17 . 2/21
I enjoy your story but a lot of it just doesn't make any sense. The people they are fighting on this world have the technological equivalency of cavemen compared to Earth. Why would they deploy all these troops and lose men and vehicles when they don't need to? The enemy doesn't have any shielding technology so just have a ship hover over the enemy and beam them into space, or a brig if you want to be nice about it. With their shields they could do whatever they want. I get that you want to describe all the fancy new toys but it just doesn't make sense. Hell, at the very least use an orbital bombardment. When you have air superiority like that artillery is useless, especially when you only have them fire one round for some silly reason. Are they trying to save money on ammo at the cost of those 3 planes that got shot down? I think you just thought up all this awesome technology and are damn sure going to use it, even if it doesn't make any sense. Or maybe you painted yourself into a corner and need to make some false conflict. With all that being said, thanks for writing, it is a lot better than I will ever do.
| Eaglestorm27 chapter 52 . 2/19
Hey salut , c'est vraiment un bon chapitre et comme l'a dit Senrab Nomis , tu prépare vraiment un background pour les prochains scénarios . Je me demande si les Quin Haalish ont rencontré la Terre ou le général Carter a été envoyé sans faire exprès par le dispositif de Merlin . Quelles genres de partages technologiques les quin Haalish et la Terre font ? Verrat-on une exploration vers l'univers du colonel Snobel ? Est ce que le Wormhole Drive va être installer sur les vaisseaux de la Terre ?
| MGMickey chapter 21 . 2/18
so far everything excellent! I loved the MacGyver reference!
| Ari989 chapter 52 . 2/17
Very well done! Another loose end, or rather two in one, of the stargate franchise are tied up. I liked your idea of who the Mimic aliens were and where they came from. I've honestly never come across a story that tries to deal with them in any way. I suppose they all ignore them as a random monster of the week, despite the fact that their Mimic technology makes a reappearance several times. Tying them in to quantum mirror was great too. I hadn't realized until now that it had never been brought up as one of the ancients' inventions. So, thanks for the update! Looking forward to next time!
| Snowdove30 chapter 52 . 2/16
Excellent chapter and worth the wait. Relieved that Earth has not stepped into another war or made further enemies. Daniel and Sam are so cute together...
| Knight121198 chapter 52 . 2/16
Fantastic Chapter, you really rounded that all off well. Hopefully we will see a more lasting relationship between the Earth and its allies and the Qin Hashaash.
| mal1287 chapter 52 . 2/16
Heya, great to see an update and an intriguing one at that! I will watch this space keenly.
| Senrab Nomis chapter 52 . 2/16
Well that was certainly interesting. I have to admit that i did not see this particular turn of events coming about. Three birds with one stone, four if you count the self created ship by the magnatar situation. And certainly a shiny stone, bordering on a rare gem.
Their story should be easy enough to confirm i suppose. Simply having the AI check through the ships databanks should do the trick.
I'm guessing Au'it Tap'i knew that Sam was a General by her uniform and their past encounters. I should point out i am slightly ambivalent about that name. While i hate the fact that i had to type out that name, and mentally debate the correct pronounciation, i also feel pity for you, having had to type it out multiple times. To add further conflict to the mix impressed with the level of creativty required to come up with it.
I am curious however just what advanced technologies they would offer Earth to fight against the Ori. They need not all be be military based to assist, a war machine does have multiple components after all. Perhaps manufacturing based to allow for the construction of a capable fleet?
Great chapter, looking forward to more.
| romanhellhound chapter 52 . 2/15
Now I must say I like how you have intertwined two questions that the ending of the series left me with. I think that this is a great way to end two mysteries and create a new future. Bravo I say.
| Animal Kingdom chapter 52 . 2/15
Thank you for the wonderful Valentine’s Day gift XD! As for your statement about this chapter not being up to par, I notice you keep saying that but I do not think such a thing exists in you stories. Also as for as apologizing; because we have gotten spoiled with timely updates please do not ever apologize for chapters that we may consider being delayed to long. I think we tend to forget that you have a job and personal priorities, Fanfiction is not paying you to write your stories; in addition to the fact until us the readers are paying your bills, putting food on your table, clothes on your back and a roof over your head we can be patient and wait for updates. If we are really lucky maybe MGM or one of the producers of the Stargate might come across your story and use it for a potential new Stargate series. Hey one can only hope can't we :-)?
At any rate I truly loved how the relationship between Daniel Jackson and Samantha Carter is developing and hope they get to the point where they become married couple; they actually complement each other.
I was on the other hand happily surprised to read that the aliens seen in the Stargate SG-1 episodes “Foothold” and “Grace “were one of the same race; when I first read the chapter and you described them as humanlike, with roughly scaled skin and eyes set far apart and but clad in dull red armor the first thought that popped in my mind was Scarrans from the series Farscape Lol XD.
Boy was I glad I was wrong but I am somewhat confused when it comes to the multiple universe concepts mainly because when the Qin Hashaash ship captain Au'it Tap'i stated that they we are not native to this reality does mean there race only exists in one reality and also when Au'it developed the Quantum Mirror device, in the hopes of interacting with other like-minded civilizations in realities other than their own it is safe to assume he meant more than just humans.
In closing Awesome Job! This chapter was great and as always I look forward to more to reading more.
| Kami No Raijin chapter 52 . 2/15
Is this the ship that trapped the Prometheous in that nebula? A dedicated science vessel will be hardpressed to face off with a warship...ur making me extremely hope for the next update...
| Separ chapter 52 . 2/15
Very nice chapter.
Not that they've made some apparently powerful friends, which new enemies are you hiding from us?