|Reviews for Fall|
| Tentai.t chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
I was never a Yokozawa fan because he was so mean to my sweet Onodera. But i'm very interested to see your take on their precanon. Will you be continuing this one anytime?
| DeathNoteLover235 chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
Interesting,seems like Onodera and Takano when they where next door to each other. WEll when you do ( if you do) i look forward to reading the next chapter.
PS: CATS RULE!
| UrSemeSheep chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY. I'm so intterested in Yoko/Taka smut goodness and I know you're thee right person to deliver that epicness.
| h to the iso chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
I love this pairing, hope you update :)
| Topeezy chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
Im super happy cuz theres a new Yokozawa x Takano fic(Theres not that many tho).Sometimes I think Yokozawa could have a brother...then I try to imagine that and Ive found it impossible I cant wait to read more especially the steamy lemon.
Plz update soon -Topeezyout.
| teabags chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
Wow oh wow !
Damn DP I wasn't expecting this at all ! Well I was because I did request and peck at you a little bit but it came and it was worth the wait. Finally we'll get a good juicy story with our favourite characters packed with delicious male goodness ! I'm loving it already and it's made me so happy.
I can already feel the suspense y'know ? I like how you write Yokozawa by the way (as you do Hiroki) like people seem to write grouchy characters up as miserable bastards but from your POV they're written so great. Actually I can't even explain what I'm trying to say right now since it's 1 am and basically you're fab I'll sum it up like that.
Ah Takano, I take it that was his mother or whatnot ? I did feel quite sorry for Yokozawa here too...Hmm they're both very distant from their families aren't they ? So similar.
Aw and you've brought kitties into it all too ! Fabulous, more cats, the better.
Gah, please update soon even though I know you're a busy person and stuff being a teacher !
It's a great start and I'm very excited now !
I crave MORE
| Mini Blue Skirt chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Ah, so once again, the set is stage for a thrilling back story of those thrilling college days! I find it deliciously ironic that Takano and Yokozawa are so similar that they immediately get on each other's nerves. Not inlike their professional relationship in the future, and that solid connection to the original plot is what draws me in further.
As always, I look forward to reading more -
| JoanIncarnate chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
whoohoo! i've been waiting for a story like this from you from a while now, it was only a matter of time.
| The Black Flamingo101 chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Woot woot! More lovely backstories to gush over! _ sweeeeeeeet.
And a teenage Yoko and Takano? Umm YES! 8D Two raging muscly bits of jail bait running around and causing mayhem and lots of other unspeakable things... yummy.
I loved Yokozawa's family situation. I always thought he should have all sisters, and younger ones at that. It really pertains to his nurturing nature :) And also probably the reason he started batting for the other team XD
Takano's little snippet was enjoyable too, and I'm already in love with that poor angsty lovable douchebag :) The idea of bonding them over cats was brilliant and very creative, seeing as how their both incredibly boring men, they were unlikely to bond over anything else. Tee hee hee.
And a promised lemon between these two growly rowdy muscle heads?
Can't wait for more dearest! And personally I'm rooting for your random plot bunnies :)
Though god knows I hate all my own -.-
| fauchocolat chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
what a lovely surprise to have after a nerve wrecking test I just had! :D You've made my day! XD Oh, but first I apologize. When I first saw the characters and the rating, I actually got skeptical. Maybe it's because I'm content with the current pairings. And, to my surprise, I actually find this fic so great that I can barely hide my grin. Sorry about that m(_ _)m
Am I dreaming here? Yokozawa and Takano in their college years! I must be in heaven now. Yokozawa is tsundere as ever and Takano's nonchalant attitude is...i don't know what you'd call it, but know that I fangirl-ed so hard at this.
Yokozawa...now I know why you're so adept in house chores despite your gruffy seme looks. And also now I know the reason why despite your cool seme appearance, you have an utterly cute uke side inside of you. Kudos to you for giving Yokozawa this lovely revelation of his past (well, lovely for me, not for him :p)
So Yokozawa already attracts cats? Or maybe cats too realize his tsundere to be too cute to be true and stick to him? Lol
Amber gaze...kya! *blush* I was reminded immediately of Takano's topless (or naked?) torso when he just woke up *0* Eeeppp!
Stalk...er...strays... Am I imagining it or is he really referring to Ritsu here?
I hope you will update this soon, although I know you won't be updating this anytime soon. Coz... you peaked my interest here! And I'm soooo curious! X3
| RavenSohma chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Not going to lie, hope this continues. I have a real soft spot deep down for Yokozawa/Takano and i really like the way you have it written so far. _ great characterization on both parts.