|Reviews for A Chance to Love|
| silversongs chapter 44 . 3/8
Welcome back. Whether or not your completely happy with the chapter, I really enjoyed it and happy to see it move forward once more. I certainly can see how RL can intervene. Don't worry about it.
| ict-welpje chapter 44 . 12/9/2013
Loving this story
nice short chapters which make a nice change compared to some stories where you spend half an hour on one chapter
don't really get why the weasleys were being paid, hope that will be explained in one of the future chapters
can't wait for the next chapters
| Centaurious chapter 2 . 11/15/2013
I cannot read your story because Sabrina is just as much of a child abuser as Albus and Minerva are, therefore, why would anything change.
Read your Edmond Burke.
| nokeyunderscore chapter 44 . 11/13/2013
| geetac chapter 44 . 11/11/2013
I like the chapter
| ILoveGeorgeEads chapter 44 . 11/11/2013
I loved loved loved loved it. it was great.
| RereMcFluffles chapter 9 . 11/11/2013
Two quick issues to point out.
One: It should not have taken 10 years to prove extreme physical, phycological and emotional abuse. She could have done it in weeks, if not days by the way you describe his interactions with the Dursleys.
Two: Your chapters are too small to really get fixed into your story. Lock in onto important events and show them in detail. The devil is in the details. Hell, many of these chapters can be shoved into large chapters with scene breaks. Simply sort them by what is going on.
| Susan M. M chapter 37 . 10/4/2013
"Dudley would have the opportunity to leave once he turned seventeen, if he survived the abuse." So Harry's uncles are willing to risk Dudley's life, despite the fact he was a minor when he hurt Harry and that he did so because no one had ever bothered to teach him differently?
| Susan M. M chapter 21 . 10/4/2013
I am not yet following your reasoning as to why Dumbledore gave Harry's money to the Weasleys, unless he thought that Lily would favor a scholarship for families who could not afford to send their children otherwise. However, Sabrina is quite right that the children will doubtless be unaware of the embezzlement. It's quite possible that Arthur and Molly don't know the source of the money.
| Susan M. M chapter 13 . 10/4/2013
So shall he be Harry Potter now or Harry Wildwind?
| Susan M. M chapter 4 . 10/4/2013
"Minerva and Poppy made the windows shake as they reprimanded Albus for a whole hour." I like the final line of this chapter.
| Guest chapter 43 . 9/24/2013
I loved loved loved was great.
| mizzrazz72 chapter 43 . 9/22/2013
Albus is a world class fool.
| geetac chapter 43 . 9/22/2013
I like the chapter
| Theta-McBride chapter 43 . 9/22/2013