Reviews for More Than One Rabbit Hole
Middle-Earth fan 202101202 chapter 2 . 8/30/2012
Really cool story, I love it so far! Please update soon
LifeOfA-FallingStar chapter 2 . 8/9/2012
This is good. You need to describe how the characters look more tho, and repetitively. Like saying their eye or hair color often along with tell people what their outfits look like, also the senior could use more description as well. If you add details after writing out what you want you'll make your chapters longer and it adds life to the story. I'm free to contact if ya want any examples or anything. :)

I really like the story tho; it seems to have a good plot along with interesting characters. I can't wait to see how this story develops. Good luck and have a nice day full of sunshine and smiles!
Pandatryoshka chapter 2 . 6/26/2012
Dude I lovez this!


I read rlly fast...

And this so helped with the contest...
Pandatryoshka chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
xDD Funny! Gweneh, you're soo funny. For some reason. xD
Last Assassin's Shadow chapter 2 . 6/17/2012
Who is it? :O can't wait 4 the next chappy xD
Leah-chan chapter 2 . 5/17/2012
please write more... please write more... please write more! Hahaha XD
Leah-chan chapter 2 . 5/17/2012
Hahaha. LOVE THIS! By the way I helped you write this too... How come you say anything about me? By the way i love how the dog heads straight towards you! Hahaha
Heze-chan chapter 2 . 5/12/2012
update pretty pretty please with a cherry on top :P
LoveGunsAndHauntingDreams chapter 2 . 5/10/2012
I love this story so far, please write more soon! _ ...but who could the owner be? i guess ill have to wait and see! catch u later! ~LGAHD~
Heze-chan chapter 2 . 5/2/2012
Bravo! awsome! this story is goin to rock!
Dolly's Toybox chapter 2 . 5/1/2012
uhh ohh
Nusuki Kisuuke chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Okay. Thaks so much for reading this! It was fun writing though I might change it a bit later. Thanks for reading and snse you're already on the review page...Review! :D