|Reviews for Postnuptial Disagreements|
| DB-Explorer chapter 28 . 2/20
That was eminently entertaining - and rather quotable.
A cursory glance at your other stories seems to show no sequel sadly. I think that would of been an entertaining read.
| ByLanternLight chapter 28 . 2/1
I have never before liked such an unlikable protagonist. Bravo! 6/5.
| Andivia chapter 28 . 1/11
Brilliant story, it's not often that I get to enjoy such a wonderfully well written and complete story. I'm especially impressed with the descriptions of magecraft, changes in plot that were unexpected and entertaining, realistic characterizations and abundance of humour. Definetely one of the best stories I've read.
| The Nameless chapter 28 . 1/3
I'd jut like to say something- Some people keep asking for a sequel for this. Personally, while a sequel would be brilliant, I'm not sure it would be any good. Most of what makes this story so fun to read is the Character Development, and if you wrote a sequel, you wouldn't be able to write much more believable character development.
Just my opinion on the subject.
| M.Etzel chapter 28 . 12/23/2013
Entertaining. Started out humorous, but built to somewhere more dramatic and, notably, desperate. No qualms were given for killing off characters who, by all rights, should die when forced into some of their situations. Just, all in all, a good read, but with a great- if unreliable- narrator.
| M.Etzel chapter 2 . 12/23/2013
... Rather quaint fellow, isn't he? Hehe.
| M.Etzel chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
Oh my goodness. That was fun to read. El-Melloi's son might be the spitting image of his father, but his attitude is... Entertaining, to say the least.
| AwsmAdm chapter 28 . 12/1/2013
Great story. I wouldn't have thought that this crossover would work, but it really does. It's too bad you never wrote the sequel.
Looking at the published and updated dates, I'm really impressed by how fast you wrote this.
| Hypothetical Spiritual Entity chapter 28 . 12/1/2013
That was an amazing story, and I don't give out praise of this sort often (though, I do give it more often than I used to). Not only is Meriwether a great character to read about, his first-person narration of pretty much anything outside of his comfort zone is guaranteed to be hilarious. I think a sequel would be very entertaining, especially if he is forced to deal with 4th War's Rider (or a similar character) at lenght in one way or another. It would also be good to see more of the canon cast. Benitsubasa's own reactions to non-El-Melloi maguses (magi?) might be very amusing as well. As it is apparent from roughly half of the review up to this point, I look forward to the sequel if you eventually decide to write one.
| Slave of the Jester Race chapter 28 . 11/7/2013
| Undying Soul98 chapter 28 . 10/23/2013
Loved this...if there isn't a sequel out already, I would love to read one.
| chimmon chapter 28 . 9/27/2013
A great story! I loved Meriweather's character arc from what could optimistically be called a jackass anti-hero to someone who genuinely cares about someone.
| exillion chapter 27 . 9/10/2013
You know, with chapter 27 omake, you could write a story about commoners revolution kind of thing. It would make sense, and for thousands of years non-magic humans are treated as serfs? That's too much...
| brunofanofk chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
| chins4tw chapter 28 . 8/18/2013