Reviews for Postnuptial Disagreements
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8
The son of the original Melon? Heh, interesting.
thepkrmgc chapter 15 . 6/10
methinks the disappearances are a result of mage interference
thepkrmgc chapter 14 . 6/10
you know, ive really got to respect the reasoning behind meriweather's choice, the sekeri's instictive/programmed reaction isnt all that dissimilar from the myriad unethical means of coercion, and its noble of him to abstain from abusing it.

i suspect the duck incident is about to backfire horribly though
thepkrmgc chapter 13 . 6/10
the idea of kotomine winging karasuba is so distrubing that im hocked nobody has written a fic about it yet
thepkrmgc chapter 12 . 6/10
since meriweather is somehow even more oblivious than shirou, of course it would take a magic ritual...
thepkrmgc chapter 11 . 6/10
while he might think he's lost everything thigns can still get worse, his father hasnt arrived yet
thepkrmgc chapter 10 . 6/10
well that backfired horribly, although the mage's analytical notetaking is rather amusing
thepkrmgc chapter 9 . 6/10
the negotiations with matsu were quite amusing, and minato's not wrong...
thepkrmgc chapter 8 . 6/10
it seems like he's not the only schemer in town, it should be interesting to see how he takes down the cannonical protagonists
thepkrmgc chapter 7 . 6/10
while this is certainly a peculiar take on a romance i think your doing a fairly good job of it nonetheless
thepkrmgc chapter 6 . 6/10
healing spells are rather useful, but i suspect that even the third true magic couldnt bring him back if karasuba gets to enjoy herself at his expense
thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 6/10
nice job balancing the power of a magus with the fundamental weakness of the human wielding that power
thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 6/10
ok, while meriweather is smarmy and conniving he's not entirely without a measure of honor despite his faults
thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 6/10
while i have to classify meriwhether as a bad guy because of his mental manipulation spells with a childhood like the letter implies it would be a surprise if he wasnt messed up
thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 6/10
it seems like the son is as arrogant as the father, though its admittedly rather amusing
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