|Reviews for The Third Lieutenant's Lady|
| muscle16a chapter 1 . 1/3
Re your making Peter Calumy "a little older here, at least old enough to be legitimately promoted to a lieutenant."
Actually, during the Napoleonic Wars, it was not uncommon for teenage acting-lieutenants to have those acting commissions confirmed. In Royal Navy history (until the system was changed in the late 19th century) there has been more than one teenage Post-Captain . . . of course, it helps to have the right connections.
| Ieatvampiresforbreakfast chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
I love your story, great fic! its awesome how Victoria's plot fits into the movie and I think that you portray the characters very truthfully, I just read it after I started writing my own fan fic with an oc and Peter, mine has a lot to live up to! great work.
| Emma chapter 22 . 4/9/2013
Wow I have just read this for a second time and its still just as fabulous as the first time I read it I've read loads of master and commander fan fictions and no doubt about it this one Is favourite
I loved it so much I really would be over joyed if you could write another master and commander fan fiction or maybe a fan fiction on something else like titanic or pirates of the Caribbean or just something ,anything
Your work is just so great I must read more
Keep it up
Bye for now
| Emma chapter 22 . 3/25/2013
Wow, very very good
I love the twists and I could tell that you really understood the characters
Maybe for your next fan fiction you could do something on the captins daughter
Good luck with all your writing
| yasupoimegane chapter 22 . 5/22/2012
Hello there, Now the story is officailly over, once again I thank you for your hard work and dedication! I really loved this story, I had a very fun time reading it, thank you! Well done!
| The.Teal.Rose chapter 22 . 5/22/2012
You have my applause! This was an amazing story and the characters were all wonderfully depicted. The ending was perfect and sweet, an ending I wish Mr. Calamy could have enjoyed in canon. Victoria was outstanding and was such a perfect match for Peter. You were so convincing that I could really picture her aboard the surprise. Thank you so much for this beautiful addition to this site :)
| yasupoimegane chapter 21 . 5/21/2012
Hello there, only one more chapter! No more of the routine of checking each day when I return home from school for a new chapter. I thank you for your hard work and dedication towards this story! Well done!
| The.Teal.Rose chapter 21 . 5/21/2012
aww, another sweet chapter. I could literally feel Peter's nervousness when he approached her father. So happy it turned out well though :) Its sad that this will be ending soon but, it has been a very pleasant read.
| yasupoimegane chapter 20 . 5/20/2012
Hello there, it's sad that the story will end soon, but I suppose all stories must end at some point. Anyway, another great chapter, Well done!
| yasupoimegane chapter 19 . 5/19/2012
Hello there, I really wasn't expecting her to resort to that, I thought she would just knock him out or something, but apparently not. I can't even imagine what it would feel like to be in her shoes, I hope she doesn't let it bother her for too long. Another fantastic chapter, well done!
| yasupoimegane chapter 18 . 5/19/2012
Hello there, I'm amazed at how calm Hastings is, I'd have a panic attack! I hope that french guy who has pinned her down gets it before he can do anything. I have some theories as to what he is going to do and not one of 'em are very pleasant at all. Another brilliant chapter, well done!
| yasupoimegane chapter 17 . 5/19/2012
Hello there, as it seems you won't be ending the story the way the movie did, and for that I am very happy! I really did not like the ending of the movie, it forced me to imagine the rest. And lets just say, my visualizations aren't as interesting to watch as a Peter Weir film. Yet another awesome chapter, well done!
| The.Teal.Rose chapter 16 . 5/18/2012
You did a really good job filling in the blanks concerning Peter's participation in the capture of the french ship. I am also so relieved that he didn't get killed during that. I hope he makes it through the fever, however. :) The moments between he and Victoria during all of that were amazing.
| yasupoimegane chapter 16 . 5/18/2012
Hello there, I know how Calamy feels when it comes to fevers, I had one a couple days ago. And now I'm sick again, it just never ends! First Calamy gets stabbed, gets a bit better, then get sick, it doesn't seem to end for him either. Anyway, another brilliant chapter!
| yasupoimegane chapter 15 . 5/18/2012
Hello there, I'm crossing my fingers so that Calamy won't die! Anyway, I love the way you decribed the fight scene, usually I can't really understand what's happening in fights scenes, there to all over. But I was able to visualize this fight scene very well, well done!