Reviews for Ten Day Poem
Dark Horse Writer chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Hey it's been quite awhile hasn't it? Anyways, I really liked your story about August. I recently have just gotten into Once Upon a Time, and if you ever find a tid bit of time to write it would be nice to see more from you, but seeing as I haven't written in awhile it is completely understandable.

Anyways, I really liked the description in your piece and the internal feelings of August/Pinocchio. That was probably one of my favorite episodes too of that season. However, with season many feelings! Can't wait till season three.
Stonington chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
August is my favorite, you have brought him to life! He has many fine adventures in store. Yes, he abandoned Emma, a bad mistake on his part. I am sure, if he reawakens in Season 2, he will have some 'splaining to do! I thoroughly enjoyed your tale, feel free to add some chapters...Please!
SLopez chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
I really enjoyed this drabble! It was very well written and I hope you'll write more on August/Emma.

August/Pinocchio is definitely one of my favorite characters on the show and as you said, I'd love to know how he adapted to this world, as well.
Anon chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
A beautifully written story, very poetic, I love how you've given us some insight into the Character of August and just how big a burden he was forced to carry and all the responsibility that came with it...he gave off a loneliness that I definitely felt which makes it understandable why he left, that he was barely a boy that barely had an unbringing and a cricket for a concience, in the current world he doesn't have the liberty of having Jiminy by his side which must have been confusing.

On the whole a very well written story, very realistic, few grammatical errors, definately one of my favourite stories in this fandom. A good job well done, would love to see more stories about thoses two.
Goutt2mer chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
Hey :D

I found your story two days ago, as I'm a big fan of the series, and I immediately read it.

I was touched by the episode with the story of August, more than the others lately seen. It was cute and touching and sad at the same time. And even if it's horrible for Snow and James, I understand the decision of Gepetto to put his little boy in the wardrobe with Emma ; after all, one would do anything for one's children... :)

And it was cute to see Pinocchio taking care of little Emma. My heart was delighted at the seen of the scene in the orphanage, the share of look between Pinocchio and Emma... So cute ! :)

Well, it was a good OS talking about that relationship, you write about it in a very good way.

I can only advise you to write more OS about OUT.

Good continuation !


secondstardust chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
Loved this. He's quickly become my favorite character as well, and I really like what you've done here with him, from beginning with his impressions as a tree, to finding his story and being mildly insulted. There really are so many questions and possibilities with him. Great job :)
Amrita chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Awsome story... Really love those two together
Violet chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
Awww, this is so adorable. You should have continued :) I know that August didn't stay with baby Emma that long but surely there would be some more moments between those two :)
Emily chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
Don't know why nobody else has review this yet, because I loved it. LOVED IT.

One question, though.

Do you ship August/Emma? If so, I'd love a story about August growing up away from her, full of guilty, and then waking up at 8:15 one morning twenty-eight years after her left to his leg?