Reviews for Telling the Family
qwertyuiop chapter 3 . 12/7/2012
what the ...
I was all innocent and reading angd then i hera about SNAPES UNDERWARE?
what has the world come to...
Ash chapter 6 . 8/5/2012
DA FAQ DID I JUST READ?!
Ringo Beeblebrox chapter 3 . 5/3/2012
Your formatting it, well, horrible. The breaks in the middle of paragraph is annoying and hard to read - so I didn't.

It looks like you either wrote this using a basic text editor, such as Notepad, or coverted it to plain text from Word. This creates a hard return at the end of each line. Don't.