|Reviews for Naruto and the Dragon King|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
The harem he made do it got the 1 form his home town like ion and others and as starfox grill
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
so much for a second chapter...
| GeubbelNI chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
Sasuke as a girl
| joe chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
i believe this should be a sasuke bashing story and he should have a twin sister that is in love with naruto
| joe chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
cant wait for the rest
| kitsune clan head chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
keep it up bro
| firedragoonknight chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
this story sounds great when is the first chapter
| Nightshadegirl chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
as much as i like seeing sasuke bash, not this time. he should stay good and maybe become a medical ninja. if any one should be bashed it's sakura. maybe sasuke could have a twin sister. for the harem i would say hinata and temari.
| ferduran chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
Hello, i just found your ficc, and looks promising, about Sasuke, he is an a$$ and made him a female is not a good idea because how many hate him this could made harder to write his parts on the plot, in stead how about that there is a girls from the Uchija clan that have yet to awake the sharingan that survive and that sasuke still wanted her because of her genes, the fact that the girl that he want choose to be part of a harem than to rebuild the Uchija clan would made Sasuke very mad with Naruto.
about the others girls, with Hinata been the main girl I would say to add Yakumo (if the wives help her she can be very powerful). Shizuka because is the first time that the plot of a arranged marriage is true and maybe Hanabi as an fraternal twin of hinata (very few use that combo).
also if you use older woman what about made that they rejuvenate to the same age as naruto, because it would be funny to see a teen Anko and Kurenai because no one have ever do it before, maybe even Tokiwa the body guard of Shizuka to made that he only have strong woman.
| Shywhitefox chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
i like some of your idea's but you really shouldnt bash a character i mean i can understand it may be difficult if you accually dislike him but lately i feel people are just putting sasuke and sakura bashing and even kiba and kakashi bashing just because they know people will say "hey that charecter i dont like is getting a serious bashing i automatically fav this story" but hey its your choice i personally dislike sakura, karin, orochimaru and to a degree kabuto and kakashi's poor teaching skills but i try my best to portray a character as best i can from the anime or manga unless of course something happens in the story that negates this
just do what you feel is right i have learned to accept bashing as a natural thing but it really lowers my interest and i am sure others maybe not many feel the same
| drgonmaster37206 chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
Sasuke should has a twin sister
| Super Saiyan God Gogeta chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
Don't bash anybody it ruins the story.
| Jinchuurikilover2 chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
i like the idea for this story so far.
1. Now Concerning sasuke i think you should bash him and leave him as a male but make a female cousin that is the same age as him. i say this because i think it would really piss him off to see a really strong naruto dating his cousin.
2. i think that temari and tenten should be in naruto's harem because they never seemed to have anything against him. plus temari would be very sympathetic to naruto because she see would see him being hated just like garra.