Reviews for FateProphecy Break
Guest chapter 26 . 11/8/2022
Heheheh touhou reference
HEHEEHEHH AYAYAYAYAYAYA
Guest chapter 5 . 10/25/2022
eh dont like it
Makimass chapter 4 . 10/13/2022
My god, Harry just can't stop being a bitch. What a Hero. He's somehow more annoying than Draco.
Makimass chapter 3 . 10/13/2022
Harry's more of a hero in the books, I don't know about this one lol. He definitely resembles book Harry when he's getting influenced by the horcrux not archer.
ShadowTenshii chapter 37 . 9/12/2022
This is so epic… I sincerely hope we’ll get to hear more someday!
ioreYagami chapter 37 . 8/15/2022
I want to read another chapter of this amazing work
JoshPlater chapter 29 . 7/11/2022
I really don't like the name Crane Wing Three Realm. It feels like it's been mistranslated. Crane Winged Third Realm rolls of the tongue better imo.
CMdkelley chapter 33 . 7/8/2022
why in the world are you continuing Harry just sitting there stun the bloody rat and call Bones...
greentea4062 chapter 37 . 7/6/2022
Aw what.
greentea4062 chapter 35 . 7/6/2022
Now I reminded why I don't like Hermione. Too bossy, too clingy, too talkative, too too!
greentea4062 chapter 35 . 7/6/2022
Yeah Patronus Charm doesn't make sense... at least to me
greentea4062 chapter 27 . 7/6/2022
Lol Mahoutokoro is definitely broken Japanese I mean I would understand if it's Mahou-dokoro but -dokoro is usually for food shops or stuff like that... J.K Rowling needs a real Japanese to help her pick the name to Japanese Hogwarts
greentea4062 chapter 21 . 7/6/2022
I quite agree, Harry. Japanese in general are in the logical-spectrum but somehow also quite accepting of the supernatural. Even the non-magicals.
greentea4062 chapter 19 . 7/6/2022
I think canon Hermione (and this Hermione too I guess) is crazy/nuts... breaking the rules over a 'hunchew) and then impersonating people... just how many crimes did she commit with these acts?
greentea4062 chapter 15 . 7/5/2022
Ha I spent much of my time reading tvtropes too
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