Reviews for FateProphecy Break
doubledamn chapter 21 . 3/8
A Flea Market's a good idea, though you'd need a staff member to ensure no contraband was being peddled, and possibly the Bloody Baron to oversee the event 'in case of Peeves'
doubledamn chapter 19 . 3/8
Almost definitely a miscast summoning spell, but all the same that snake seemed familiar...

Also, how did Myrtle die? The Basilisk kills with a glare, and petrifies with non-direct eyesight. But Colin was petrified by looking through his camera, and while Justin was done though Nick, Nick is translucent, not transparent so that makes a bit more sense. If anything the camera would have given a clearer image, and Myrtle wears glasses, they were such a part of her she wears them as ghost. It is safe to assume that she was wearing them at point of death, and if not, then her bad eyesight would be enough to count as 'non-direct'. So why did she die when she saw the Basilisk through her glasses?
doubledamn chapter 17 . 3/8
Is it ever explained how Myrtle floods the bathroom? We've seen that there is a definite difference between Ghosts and Poltergeists in J.K's work. Poltergeists can take a physical form and manipulate the world around them, ghosts are largely immaterial, with the exception of Myrtle flooding the bathroom.
doubledamn chapter 1 . 3/6
Eh, you know what they say. A million to one shot happens 8 times out of ten.
OmegaUltima chapter 37 . 2/27
Argh, so...many...hanging...threads...

Well, here's hoping you haven't died or something, and eventually plan to continue (AND FINISH) this, even 3 years later, because I REALLY want more
oreghost8 chapter 37 . 2/14
Please continue, it's just getting good, don't leave us hanging
eNervFlinC chapter 37 . 2/6
no! the cliff hanger killing Me!
Hewhocommunes chapter 37 . 1/29
Even though I am mostly certain that this story has been abandoned, I wanted to leave a review to let you know how thoroughly I enjoyed what has been written. So thanks for that.
all forms of fluff chapter 37 . 1/22
Three years you've left it on a cliffhanger... soo cruel. I've enjoyed this story so far. Its really cleaver on the world building. I like the rings, and the alchemical weapons. If your going for Reborn Box Weapons then It would almost Have to be an Alchemical construct like Harry's watch. I'm really enjoying the action you have added to the story. Sometimes its a bit hard to follow but its always well thought out. And I believe that Harry is rather well depicted, especially if you consider him an anime protagonist. Those guys are always teenagers winning against adults. Its actually believably executed as Harry relies on his physical fitness to out maneuver most of his opponents and its only those who have had martial training, or insanely over powered magically, that can stop him cold. That being said not all is all rainbows and hugs. I don't get why Harry was 'correcting' Hermione's behavior. It was like reading a time travel fic. Why did he put in the effort...unless he was modeling his behavior after how Archer is with him, Just got that.. Moving on. I guess my biggest gripe is that the Japan arc even existed. Yes it advanced Harry's skills and it gave him a reason to react to the dementors, as I couldn't see the kid who uses his mothers death scream as mental trigger for Magecraft having that many memories that the wraits could induce the state he was in the books. That being said It took up half of the Enchantment story and introduced a lot of characters that may never be seen again. Then I could see the Japan school showing up for the Tri Wizard Tournament, but in order to do that you would have to exclude one of the others, and sense you have already introduce the French Champion ... that's getting ahead of the current story. Most of my other gripes are little things, like Harry riding the Knight buss to his parents grave, then saying he hadn't when he rode it again with Hermione. Then there is his foster parents. On one hand they are awesome people on the other they seem rather care free about Harry doing his own thing. Barring the one instance in Japan its like they don't care about being with Harry and him being in danger. That's not to say that I believe that's how they are but for a large portion of the story they were like functionaries so that Harry would still be ignorant of the wizarding world. But these are minor gripes. I have rather enjoyed the world building and cant wait to see what happens next. I whish you would continue. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Fireguy892 chapter 37 . 1/19
just finish reading and can't wait for more
shadyxlr chapter 15 . 1/11
Gotta wonder now if Luna will know something...
Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2017
is the author dead?
Rawrking chapter 1 . 12/21/2017
smh adding FMA elements trash fic
Logan chapter 37 . 12/21/2017
Thank you for making such a good fic
I have a recommendation what about you have Harry make the charging inscription out of the same color crystal he’s charging that way the crystal he’s charging is receiving the same type of magic that it stores thus reducing the strain on it while charging.
SonicAnime2010 chapter 26 . 11/21/2017
So... the bunbunmaru newspaper is delivering outside of gensokyo
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