Reviews for FateProphecy Break
zachariahm chapter 37 . 11/5
Shame this got dropped, it was quite good for the most part. Japan arc was mixed, but I enjoyed the rest.
zachariahm chapter 28 . 11/4
Meh
Guest chapter 1 . 10/31
I like the way you messed up that summoning, author. It's verily amusing. And not to worry, not even Nasu really knows Nasuverse rules. It's fine.
ManticoreBlues chapter 37 . 10/28
yo, this shit is really fucking good, possibly one of the best fanfics I've ever read and I've read alot of em, I knows it's been years but I desperately want to see this continued, don't know if you still use fanfiction but I hope you do, see this, realise that this needs continuation and continue it and then write till completion because this is beautiful and if it's not continued I will cry for months and mourn for years damnit
ManticoreBlues chapter 8 . 10/25
you know i'm just starting to hypothesize that harem protags aren't actually dense(depending on case), cause I mean if one or two girl's showed signs I'd like to think I'd get it relatively quickly but I also feel like if it was a larger amount of girls I'd just take it as girls being more open to emotional expression unless they were straight with me about it
alefrosier chapter 4 . 9/20
essa fanfic é um lixo é um daqueles muitos trapos que transforma o mundo trouxa em seres perfeitos, quando na verdade existe muito mais racismo no mundo trouxa que no mundo bruxo
Himeragiyukina12 chapter 8 . 9/11
I simply cannot understand this. At the drop of a hat, he pulls a wand and points it at three people and then calms down instantly and holsters it again. What kind of emotional retard is he? This is the same reason I have trouble reading most any Fanfiction. The main characters simply fail to act like a normal human would. It just feels so excessive.
Himeragiyukina12 chapter 6 . 9/11
Why is it that despite his whole new experiences and having archer in his head, he still behaves like a complete retard? With how often we see Archer push Harry towards caution, this whole chapter seems off contextually.
dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 8/27
awesome idea and chapter
Guest chapter 2 . 7/6
Tracing, is unique to Shirou, no one else can learn it, to his degree.
As they're just gonna have a pale imitation, compared to Shirou, they're very fragile, and weaker by a large margin.
As he's element, and origin, is both sword. It helps tracing a noble phantasm, easier, and possible, compared to the other magus.
loyd2517 chapter 4 . 7/2
idk if you still alive but plss update this story its so good cant denaid it
weirdbutOK chapter 31 . 7/1
NOOO! not him
blacksoul21 chapter 37 . 6/18
me encanta esta historia que la e leído varias veces
me encantaría que algún día la continuaras por el simple echo de saber como se desarrolla el cuarto año y como empezaría a rebelar la magia q a aprendido

también creo que debiste mostrar mas diferencia en el poder de combate de Harry en algunas de sus batallas pero aun a si me encanta la historia

me daría mucha ilusión que crearas una historia con shiro rin y arturia o solo shiro y rin o shiro y arturia como padres adoptivos de Harry por planes de Kischur Zelretch Schweinorg donde jode los planes de albus dumbledore hasta que tuviera que regresar a Bretaña para el torneo ya que vive en Japón

ese seria una idea que me gustaría que consideres si decides regresar ya que creo que darías una trama muy buena como esta
2theMoon chapter 1 . 6/6
this story got me into fate stay
Guest chapter 37 . 5/13
Great Fic. Please Update.
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