Reviews for FateProphecy Break
Argonaut986 chapter 34 . 7/19/2019
Harry was not happy with Neville.
Argonaut986 chapter 33 . 7/18/2019
Harry’s plan went a bit to smoothly, because Harry forgot to account for Ron’s reaction.
Argonaut986 chapter 32 . 7/17/2019
Percy has a big, inflated ego!
Argonaut986 chapter 31 . 7/16/2019
Harry is quite serious about getting answers.
Argonaut986 chapter 30 . 7/13/2019
Harry is not happy about that attempted attack.
Argonaut986 chapter 29 . 7/11/2019
Harry has to grow up eventually.
Argonaut986 chapter 28 . 7/10/2019
Harry will be taking his second life, that of Makiri.
Argonaut986 chapter 27 . 7/10/2019
Harry got captured? That’s not good.
Argonaut986 chapter 26 . 7/9/2019
Kaori is not the best judge of character.
Argonaut986 chapter 25 . 7/9/2019
Looks like a bout of the potter luck.
Argonaut986 chapter 24 . 7/8/2019
The Black case will open a new can of worms.
Argonaut986 chapter 23 . 7/8/2019
Harry unintentionally gained a new magic circuit.
Argonaut986 chapter 22 . 7/8/2019
So the third confrontation has commenced.
Guest chapter 37 . 7/7/2019
Too bad this seems to be no longer continued. Hoped to see Harry realize that he's also being guilty of the same mistake that Dumbledore makes by trying to do everything himself and at best cluing people in after the fact. Granted, it always seems to have worked so far thanks to EMIYA's presence and because the author wants him to be right and hyper-competent. I mean, at least for the diary, it seems bizarre that he didn't just turn it in as something he randomly found in the bathroom (which is true) instead of deciding to go down there without a rooster (i mean, really. you know the creature's weakness, but decide to forgo bringing it? It's not like the roosters were well guarded since Ginny could snap the necks of 4 of them and get away). I wouldn't mind it if Harry's obvious paranoia was portrayed more evenly, as it brings both benefits and downsides, but since he's the hero, it feels like there's definite bias to only show the upsides. It just comes too much as trying to show Harry being the only sensible one who is always correct and that everyone else is an idiot.
Argonaut986 chapter 21 . 7/7/2019
The first Hogwarts bazaar was a resounding success!
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