Hama was my favorite and actually get death is what made me cry finally, I held it in all through TBG but I couldn't help it, you wrote it so beautifully, I think Pakku might have to become my favorite because of this chapter, I am really going to miss her though.

Loving both TBG and this sory, but there is something that has been bothering me immensely for quite some time now: An Agni Kai is a FIRE duel (it literally translates to "fire meeting"), so obviously anyone who isn't a fire bender cannot fight in one.

Right now I'm going to hazard a guess that Zuko is the new Avatar. I've had this idea since he was revived and his eyes glowed. I may be wrong, but I hope not. Let's see. Loving the story so far.

Katara be like,"NO PUDDIN' FO YOU!" in this chapter. Nobody should ever have to go through the agony of someone gloating over their pudding... not even zuko :P

well if katara isn't fighting, zuko volunteering was kind of pointless...

great story so far but I have noticed a few typos in both this and the prequel. I know you've finished the series (at least I think you have?) but you might want to go through and fix them. #sohappyzukodidn'tstaydead

HAMA AND PAKKU HAVE TO FIGHT?! NOOOOOOOOOOO

This story makes me so angry and so emotional and i'm just screaming in my dorm room, super relieved that my room mate is out

Ok hey i just left a review of me screaming because this story gives me a lot of feelings and here's another one: OH MY GOD SAVE THE PRINCE SAVE THE PRINCE SAVE THE PRINCE SAVE ZUKO SAVE HIM SAVE HIM SAVE HIM **side note: BUT I DONT WANT BOWEN TO DIE NOOOOOOOOO

ugh, feelings

OKAY SO I'VE BEEN READING THE BLACK GAMES AND THEN THIS BACK TO BACK AND OH MY GOD HOW COULD YOU I'M JUST SO...UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MAKE IT STOP MAKE IT STOP ZUKO AND BOWEN AND HAMA AND PAKKU CAN'T DIE THEY CAN'T YOU ALREADY KILLED OFF TOPH I HAVE SO MANY EMOTIONS GAH!

Dammit you made me cry with chapter 17. Just imagining the anguish and betrayal and everything is just... You are such an amazing writer, if you ever publish a book tell me and I will be the first in line to get. I don't cry easily at all. Haven't cried in months an I just... You are SUCH an amazing author it's just... Oh my god

June, no! So sad, especially about Hama, too. I swear Zuko's family has got some serious cray cray genes. Ozai is just wack, like Azula.

Yeah, sweet Zutara interaction.

The play was really funny, lover how you describe the over acting.

The Ozai question made me laugh out loud. Sooo glad the writer muse took over and we got the kiss. Thanks to the shipper watchers for recording all!