| Reviews for The Rise of One |
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   lulu2613 chapter 4 . 11/22/2020 That was epic! I wish could actually see Zuko be resurrected. I have to agree to disagree on only seeing this trilogy from Katara will keep the bias out. Because whenever Katara feels a certain way about an experience or an event or towards a person we feel the same. We are biased towards Katara. That’s the nature of writing and/or reading from a first person POV. |
| lulu2613 chapter 3 . 11/22/2020 Wait I thought Kya died when Katara was 1 years old. And I thought Katara was comparing Zuko to Lu Ten and Sokka to Bowen. Well she did compare Zuko to Bowen when she first met Bowen. |
| lulu2613 chapter 2 . 11/22/2020 I like this Bowen character! |
| lulu2613 chapter 1 . 11/22/2020 Is Lu Ten really an OC though? He’s a canon character just a dead canon character. Yay Iroh! Loved the prologue by the way. You changed the title but used it as a chapter title and it works! |
| Guest chapter 27 . 10/5/2020 I get your thing with kisses just happening. I am a writer too and I’ve noticed that I don’t choose when my characters kiss. It just feels right. |
| Gigipink chapter 19 . 9/23/2020 Katara is acting kinda stupid right now. She's mentioning the White Lotus too much in public. |
| Gigipink chapter 17 . 9/23/2020 I figured Hama would volunteer. Lu Ten should've volunteered... |
| C chapter 17 . 9/14/2020 Zuko, are you nuts?! Katara doesn't have unlimited spirit water! |
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/4/2020 what’s gonna happen to appa now that aang is dead? |
| maya chapter 26 . 6/20/2020 i really like how you gave zuko the ability to bend lightning while still keeping this ability in check with his character (if I remember correctly, he only uses it as a last resort to spare a painful death, like he's trying to separate himself from Azula). |
| maya chapter 24 . 6/20/2020 of course you did that bowen *rolls eyes and sighs* |
| maya chapter 17 . 6/20/2020 why do I feel like Katara is going to end up doing something stupid as a mentor to get Zuko sponsors or something... |
| maya chapter 14 . 6/20/2020 OMG THE CACTUS JUICE AHAHAHAHA |
| mia chapter 7 . 6/19/2020 I feel like Pakku definitely fell for one of his fellow competitors and either watched them die or killed them himself in order to understand what Katara's feeling |
| Aiedail4eva chapter 27 . 4/23/2020 Still loving re-reading this story, and I can’t wait to finally finish it with the next installment! I’ll be finishing reading this story when I literally first read TBG in like 2014... hey we ended up here eventually! I’m so glad that you did finish this story, thank you so much for all the time and heart you put into it. It’s been so nostalgic reading it again. Some parts I had forgotten, and it was so fun reading them and enjoying this story all over again. I can’t even remember if I read any/much of the third installment, so I’m so excited to finally see how this story ends. Again thank you! -Xoxo |