I don’t believe I mentioned this before, but I love that Zuko has her mother’s pendant on his wrist. Gets me all giddy inside when you mention it.
I am excited and nervous to start the final book in this series of yours. I didn’t make the connection until now that you wrote one of my favorite fics, the Swan Princess one that I forgot the title of but it’s based around that one song - damn good story.
I’m not sure I’ll ever be ready for the final leg of this journey you’ve sent us on. The nature of THG is brutal and there isn’t a lot of room for happy endings. I trust you will do us justice.

I’ve got a bad feeling Ozai isn’t going to like the sacrifice or show they put on.

I think it’s due time for me to recognize a real one... Joo Dee’s character is funny, entertaining and likable - even for Capital Scum ;)

I do think it’s sad Katara keeps asking Bowen not to kill Zuko, but never asks Zuko not to kill Bowen. That’s gotta be a kick in the gut every time.

The bison whistle reminds me of Chekhov’s gun. You’ve made a point to showcase it, even if just in passing, the last few chapters.

I love me some angsts fluff. And I love Bowen parallels with Finnick and Annie (forgot if that’s her name, been a while since I read the books)

I am disappointed in Katara for not trying harder to establish sponsors. She kept saying she had to focus on them and try but she failed in every instance or simply didn’t try at all. Definitely shows her pride and some of her weaknesses, I love Katara but that was something that pissed me off about Katniss and I don’t love seeing it in her. But it makes for a juicy story and stress with lack of sponsors. The plot must go on!

I’m getting really annoyed with some of your reviewers shaming smut though. Like the shaming is so gross to me, idk. I think if you wanna write it or read it, do it. This is totally non-consequential for me to bring up, I know, and I didn’t come to this story for that kind of stuff but it just irritates me. The comment at the end of this chapter about authors using it to show love just reeks to me cause like... people in love have sex, kiddo. Idk why I brought it up I just felt annoyed and - even though I wasn’t expecting smut in this story - I felt shamed for having read it. Big yikes to those reviewers.

Anyways love this u’re amazing and perfect

I am very excited to see where this path takes us. I love learning the behind the scenes tasks the mentors have. It’s something I wish we saw more of in THG so I’m more than pleased to see it happening now.
This would certainly make for a boring book, but I can’t help but think if I was in Hama’s position, I’d stop Fire Lord Ozai’s heart, consequences be damned. Make it took like a heart attack or maybe cause an aneurism. Ozai wouldn’t be a martyr then, just a victim of circumstance. It can happen to anyone, after all.
Boring book, but it’s what I would have done. It’s untraceable.

That being said, can’t wait for Hama to fuck up some tributes.

I knew Hama would volunteer and I can’t decide if I’m relieved or devastated to hear it. The moment she said everything would be okay, I knew but also wanted to pretend it wasn’t what I thought.
But I am interested in seeing how Katara blows these games into smithereens from the back end.

I loved June’s costume!

I’m so glad they kissed, even if that wasn’t your plan. Obviously, it had to be done! Your brain wanted it. I don’t know if I would have survived this chapter if they didn’t.

You were planning a Makorra story with Mako as an equalist? You have so many planned stories I would DIE to read

Zhao! I knew it the moment you mentioned his sideburns!

I love your writing, it’s amazing and one of the very few fan fictions that I have read multiple times. I would like to point out a couple of inconsistencies that i could have just missed your explanation perhaps. In this chapter, 16, you mention that Pakku was her mentor but Pakku refused to help her because she’s a woman, so it would have been Hama sitting next to her. Another thing, in the Black Games, I believed you mentioned there were no air bending victors when you introduced Aang, yet you have in this chapter and mentioned it in a previous one when Katara and Joo Dee are in the carriage to make an appearance. The second one I’m fuzzy on, but I’m pretty sure that was mentioned. I hope this helps even though you have finished the series by now I believe.
You are truly a great writer and I wish that I could have a copy of even just a tiny portion of your skill. I look forward to reading other stories you continue to write.

this was such a good chapter...

bowen and june are such baes 3