|Reviews for Naruto: Underneath the Underneath|
| duy.tranphuc chapter 37 . 2/17
The mother of all twist mate, I can't even think of this coming.
Also the time thingy really hard to follow for the first while but I guess it because I didn't expect it at all.
| marquis.shax chapter 28 . 2/16
ok I know Nagato was Jiraiyas student but Naruto doesn't have the Rinnegan so who would be his second student to have one as that makes absolutely no sense
| marquis.shax chapter 25 . 2/16
hmm take out Yugito an put in Fu (like her more than Yugito plus she seems to be around Naruto's age as she took the Chunin exams in Suna while Naruto was on his training trip) Hinata or Ino an you'd have one hell of a sexy group going there for the girls lol
| marquis.shax chapter 3 . 2/15
I think you're trying to hard with Sakura as there's absolutely no way in hell she could pull off the Shadow Shuriken Jutsu as that's an A ranked jutsu derived from the shadow clone an while the Shuriken won't have chakra of their own it would still take a LOT of chakra to multiply them to make the jutsu to be effective at all
| cloystreng chapter 37 . 2/14
I think I need to go back and re-read. Looking forward to it!
| ONDER chapter 15 . 2/14
The sass is real!
| Caligulah chapter 2 . 2/13
Interesting premise, but the spelling and grammar bother me too much. I lost it when Sakura shouted, "LAIR" instead of "LIAR". If it gets edited later on, I might give it another go.
| Andu The Prophet chapter 37 . 2/13
hehe, glad you are back man, one of the best writers out here
| MIKE202303 chapter 24 . 2/13
I like how you humble naruto he says that a is stronger pfft a's if he is faster then him without character with it he is the fastest and strongest in the world and everyoneelse thinks so
| buterflypuss chapter 37 . 2/13
| greenblue22 chapter 37 . 2/13
I swear this is the best story I've ever read on FanFiction . It's just so detailed
| darkhuntressxir chapter 37 . 2/13
So that's how naruto got sent to the past?
| Elim Garak chapter 1 . 2/13
A basic spell checker would have told you to capitalize the word "I". A basic grammar checker would have helped with capitalization in the middle of a sentence. That said, I've seen worse. And not read it.
| desdelor97 chapter 37 . 2/13
This was a great chapter.
Please keep up the great work.
| ElisabethMably chapter 7 . 2/12
"Naruto has parents?"
I can not take this shit, I am laughing to hard...