Reviews for Naruto: Underneath the Underneath
Guest chapter 37 . 1/16
Seems like this story is made up of 2 - 3 different storylines put together...1) Naruto as ANBU Puppy/Fox; 2) Godaime Naruto; 3) Naruto & Madara - Time Displacement...
renextronex chapter 5 . 1/17
I really think that the rape thing was way overboard
renextronex chapter 3 . 1/17
why are authors so insistent in depicting these braindead council and sasuke? whatever suspence of disbelief that the reader is holding gets blown out of the window unless he is 5 years old
Swordalfgun chapter 6 . 12/29/2017
Hazard Zone chapter 37 . 12/28/2017
One of the best stories i've read in a long time but like all others it was never finished, disappointing.
lucasrosa94 chapter 36 . 12/14/2017
muito bom.
YokaiAngel chapter 37 . 11/26/2017
Soulhope The Wolf chapter 7 . 11/23/2017
hmm well it may sound cool to pair a Nodatchi with a claymore, the way they are used and balanced it would be better for naruto to just have the claymore as it is a far more versatile weapon. its also not as hevy as you would think as it weights between 4.9 and 6.2 pounds. however it is counter balenced to the point were you would not feel the weight all that much. i could go on but it comes down to what a person likes more.
Soulhope The Wolf chapter 6 . 11/23/2017
i would have loved to have suggested a sword that had the ability to alter its size based on amount of chakra and forged from a piece of Zabuzas sword. cause i feel if it was made using Zabuzas sword it would have K. ability to heal itself.
Soulhope The Wolf chapter 3 . 11/22/2017
should have put this on Kakashi's apprentice, however i would say chakra stones could be a component in chakra metal via using the ground dust of the stone as a additive to the steel. hmm as sakura redeemed herself in my eyes a bit i feel your making her a bit to stupid.
marquis.shax chapter 19 . 11/10/2017
don't know why I never picked up on this before when I read this BUT if Pedo Snake can't use any chakra how exactly is he going to switch bodies? Sure in canon he did it but he didn't need hand seals for it but he'd still need the chakra for it and if he's not producing chakra except to his organs/eyes(why the eyes when he doesn't have a dojutsu?) he shouldn't be capable of switching unless he's going to forcefully open some of the gates long enough to give him a chakra boost to do the transfer
bananahead1 chapter 1 . 10/10/2017
fight with arochimaru you wrote that naruto is almost unbeatable in taijutsu and in the anime he has kage like chakra and book he's a demon in control and apparently arochimaru beat him in 3 attacks and naruto was only able to do 2 attacks what happened to naruto being smart
Guest chapter 12 . 10/1/2017
But Shika and Temari are supposed to be together!
Guest chapter 26 . 9/21/2017
why does everyone think only males can rape? it's stupid
Guest chapter 20 . 9/19/2017
why are women so fucking annoying?
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