|Reviews for I Would Be Your Slave.|
| D chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
Love the ending, u shld continue it!
| Bloodsired chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
Served the Bully right!
| XxXSmiles101XxX chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
Interesting start, I wouldn't mind seeing where it goes :D
| Getsunohimesama chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
Well, that Jodie-lady had it coming. Though an owl attacking her was a bit much, I'll admit.
Nice job! :)
| Bee-cee-kay chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Oh this is spectacular! Loved the very creepy vibe.
| excentricaluli chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
hhhuuuu! I like it really will you continue this? pleaseeeeeee! :)
| Ie-maru chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Is this a one-shot? It feels like it could be, but the story isn't listed as complete, or at least that's not how it shows. If it's meant to eventually be more, I'd look forward to reading it - if its a one-shot then I have to say its a really good one!
If you plan on continuing this ever, please update again soon!
| Miss Rune chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Cool... Is there more or is this a one shot?
| silfursvik chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
i totally would have called for the Goblin King. I'm sorry, but when they messed with the book, that where the line is drawn. actually, i'm impressed by Sarah not fighting back. I would have broken that girl's nose, no doubt.
awesome job on the story! it's very well written, extremely interesting.
| Lily-Beth.Bluebell chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
Hey, nice name BTW. Gave me a little laugh :)
"Life on other worlds" made me think of Life on Mars Bowie. It was kinda cool :D Dunno if you did it intetionally or not, but it was cool :D
I always think that bullying is a touchy subject to write about for some people. I myself has the amazing good fortune. I was never bullied. Teased occasionally as a young child, but never bullied, however, my friend was and it was awful to watch. So in a way, this story could affect everyone. They'd be able to associate their own memories with Sarah's torture or even see her as a friend going through the same thing that their friend once did.
And Labyrinth is the perfect place to write a story like this as Sarah IS different and she didn't seem to mention any friends in the movie.
I'll be honest and say that at first, it seemed very un-Sarah for her to never retaliate, but after a while of thinking about it, I realized that it is VERY Sarah. Of course she has a fiery side but where this kind of bullying is concerned, it seems as if you've nailed her reactions.
The sad thing is that a the character of Sarah deserves a friend in her own world but as the saying goes "Kids can be cruel" and "girls are bitches" XD. WOW, would you look at all that I've written? It's a fanfiction, not a retelling of REAL LIFE events, LB. Anyhoo, Ima keep reviewing.
AH, this Jodie person is a BITCH, dude. Mud and lakes and stuff? If this girl existed, I'd like to punch her.
And Jareth, kind of there but not. It was frustrating LOL. Trying to help but realizing he is doing intense harm and being scary and being Jareth. I don't know WHAT I'm talking about any more. This story was awesome and I'm adding to to my Faves. Deal with that XD
| Iggy Valentine chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
Oh this was quite dark and interesting indeed!
I had a girl that used to bully me and encouraged her friends to do the same, so it a hit a little close to home for me but I did still find this really superb for a one-shot. And an emotional response is always good.
| jennifer chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
wow, that was... quiet an opening.
I like that how dark you want to make it depends on your own imagination.
I hope you continue it
| hannah chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Creepy and sensitive and completely gripping, this is an awesome story and I really hope you continue it
| lyranna chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
| Bethany chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Wow really good. One of few quality Labyrinth stories! I love how you keep up the mysterious atmosphere until the end. :)