Reviews for And Then I Cried
a hetalia lover chapter 4 . 8/20/2012
This is so amazing and cute! i love the emotions in this story! Please write the next one soon!
Athesia chapter 4 . 8/20/2012
I lub dis! Ermahgerd! Amasing! Update soon! Get rid of le cliff hangers! I hate them!
southparkyaoifan chapter 2 . 5/17/2012
like ivan you ass go after yao insted of mattie, yao just as cute but wiht a tighter ass
Francis Bonnifoy chapter 2 . 5/13/2012
I can just guess who the nurse is ...Hungry probslbly not but i can picture her as the nurse
whathe chapter 2 . 5/11/2012
Poor mattie! but awwwww. so cute!
blueisme chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
cute~ but it needs editing and lot's of it. This chapter needs to be longer for what you have put in it and you need to try and capture their personalities a bit better. You have started in an odd place here which makes it harder for you but you can probably make it work. For next chapter just remember, more details and more editing. but well done for a first try .
whatshiscape chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
the plot is good, but it have a few grammar and spell mistakes. I think it would be better if you checked before posting it. Still, I like it *-* I'll be waiting for the next chapter ~
Naniori chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
Sounds like a nice story! I can't wait for the next chapters :)