Reviews for Devotion
Lady Of Order And Chaos 1995 chapter 7 . 5/30/2017
"he got the job for paid intern at Business Company after we graduated high school. "?
Weren't they in collage?
Mitsukini Haninozuka chapter 17 . 4/27/2017
I really love this story, it's well written, do you accept requests? I have a bunch of stories that I'm working on, and I need a helper to write some other ideas of mine, I have the summaries written.
DevilPrincessOfDarkWorld chapter 17 . 7/23/2016
This is definitely going to my favorites.
Lavonya chapter 17 . 6/4/2016
SneezySoul chapter 17 . 5/31/2016
awe this was surprisingly cute i loved it haha

and i cant critique im so sorry :c i really loved this, though. I'm not one for sexual content or things like it, and the part with dan certainly surprised me, but this was a very good fanfiction and you should be proud. Go treat yourself, you deserve it.

I kind of wish there were more interaction with their children. Like, you left a bit off, and it's okay because that's how this fiction did things, but it still left me wishing for those little scenes, like I don't know, first word excitement or maybe babies first icecream. Cute things for me to obsess over haha. Maybe you could make some one-shots someday, or maybe I could, but oh well. One day.

Blah I'm trying to make this review count, I'm so sorry for rambling haha. I loved this fiction a lot, though. :D
xTCatxx chapter 17 . 5/11/2016
oh my gosh i loved your story it was perfectly matched to the cartoon and was easy to imagine that happening lol just wished you had a short story on them getting married lol but otherwise I was enjoying reading this story
xTCatxx chapter 1 . 5/10/2016
it's great i can't stop reading
N Harmonic chapter 2 . 6/22/2013
I wish college was that easy today. :(
Guest chapter 17 . 3/10/2013
I really liked this story. Before I read this fic I had only found and read one other fic where Danny goes back in time and falls in love with Vlad. So I am really glad you did this fic.

What happened to Dani (the clone)? I think you mentioned her once when Danny was in the past. Danny was trying to figure out future Vlad and I think he thought about Dani. But then when Danny was trying to live through time to get back to the time when he left for the future, you didn't mention her again. It works without it, but I just wondered what Danny thought of it.
Lovelyskytoday chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
all you're stories rock
Narumina12 chapter 17 . 9/22/2012
Play-doh, heh. I've already read this three times, I love it and that is mainly what gets me. The play-doh.
I love how it all just falls together in peace. And how you didn't open with a sex scene, those turn out too depressing, I don't do depressing.
I've wanted to do a review for some time now, but I kinda hit a wall just now and can't think of anything to continue my own story with.
So, I'll reveiw my favorite stories...
Gods I'm tired
TenebrisCor chapter 17 . 9/13/2012
Oh my goodness..
That was the best VladxDanny story I have ever read! It was incredible.. I love the full circle that they went through, and Vlad pretending to be evil, I just cannot get over it :D

Thank you do much for the time that you spent writing this.
malphigus chapter 17 . 9/9/2012
The story is very sweet and aww it just warms my heart. I really love the main idea and it's very well written! Def add to my favorites. :)
Guest chapter 17 . 7/11/2012
Oh my gosh your story was great

But I must say 1 thing over night when I read this I was wondering what would have happened if Dash was about saw Danny with Avariella and was still about to fight Danny

But I'm just sayin so can you please think of it thank you :3
Guest chapter 5 . 7/3/2012
he does know hes a boy right?
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