Reviews for Nabiki's Heartache
KingBeasta chapter 1 . 3/4/2022
U need to fix it it's hard to read
ElvisF231 chapter 4 . 1/17/2017
i can't believe i read the second chapter in 15 hours.
10/10 fic, i love so much this story :3
Ranma X Nabiki 4ever :'D
Guest chapter 4 . 12/7/2015
Too short
SmartzyFan chapter 2 . 4/5/2015
That part wherein Shampoo was *suddenly* inspired to send a fire spell was hilarious. Uh, that whole scene, actually. I love this. Well done!
shugokage chapter 4 . 11/16/2013
Amazing story great job!
Jin 24 chapter 2 . 5/17/2013
I really liked this chapter it had a lot of emotion and played on nabiki and ranma's relationship really well
Jin 24 chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
I thought this was a pretty good insight chapter
Dumbledork chapter 4 . 5/26/2012
I'm really glad to see you're back.
Raynze76 chapter 4 . 5/25/2012
great story! i laughed so hard with pchan getting flash frozen then fireballed!
griffenvamp chapter 4 . 5/24/2012
great to see you finished the story its a great sory
Wonderbee31 chapter 4 . 5/24/2012
A neat ending, and glad to see you back and writing again, and do hope to see more of Little Angel Lost, one of my top ten fics that I like to re-read when I have time.
Ryo OKi chapter 4 . 5/24/2012
Actually I portrayed Akane quite accurately. She's spoiled, delusional about her own abilities and reacts with violence when she doesn't get her own way. Is she some inhuman monster, no, but she is not the saint that some "akanephiles" make her out to be.
tuatara chapter 4 . 5/24/2012
…Even in your epilogue, you can't resist spending half of it bashing Akane.

Sigh.
late night reader chapter 2 . 6/12/2006
good story overall, I enjoy it. just curious though, if Kasumi can teleport around at will, she no longer needs a ladder to be climbing up onto the roof with, nor enter through the window. Perhaps she could of popped onto the roof and overheard thru the open window? then popped into the room to catch the kissing?
Nysk chapter 2 . 6/6/2006
Excellent story, a shame there is not more.

Thanks for writing what you did!
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