|Reviews for Voices from the past|
| arkblazer chapter 2 . 6/29/2012
It was nice, but a little bit too short.
I don't know if he'd remember them at that moment in time.
Also i think id make more sense if he just had sudden flashbacks like in the games.
| Danish Existence chapter 2 . 5/20/2012
Despite the short length and the lack of bigger context, this snapshot is really good because of the way you characterize and describe the characters and their reactions. I love the way you portray Roche and Geralt, and the small hints about what goes through Roche's head about Geralt. I liked a lot how you described Roche's frustration for example.
I think the story is intense, and it stirs my curiosity. I wish to read more.
| Danish Existence chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
Funny idea for a story. Hope you'll continue, because the scenario is enticing.
It seems to me like you used a program to translate, like Google translate, or something similar, because the text needs a few linguistic corrections. You should look for a beta-reader to help you with that, if you have more similar stories in store. The piece is good, but it gets a bit spoiled by the language mistakes.