|Reviews for A Little Orange Dress|
| TakoTamago chapter 8 . 11/8/2013
if you need help then I would not mind help? I am not the best but I always have ideas.. and I love Tala so if I can get a way to get more with him then I will do anything to gelp
| Yoko Fujioka chapter 8 . 8/28/2013
Honestly I really would like you to continue this, I absolutely adore cross-dressing, and this whole thing just totally seems like something my own OC would do, not to mention the sorta-kinda TyKa back there made me so freaking happy it wasn't even funny XDD
But by 'continue' do you mean collab with you, or just continue being a loyal follower? If it's the former I really hope I'm not to late because I'd really love to!
Like I said, I adore this sort of situation, and if it'd be okay with you I actually already found a way to slip my own OC in, since she's about as crazy as Tala is in this story so I imagine it can't be much worse no matter how much more crack you add XDD
If you know of DA, my username on there is Yoko-tan, PM or message me on there and I can give you a shitton of references of her and my general writing, although you can also just look on my profile on here for that as well XDD
Good day :3
| M103752 chapter 8 . 8/27/2013
well thats a shame :(
hope you keep going, but frankly, my creative talents (or lack of) won't be much help here.
| gizmo5225 chapter 8 . 8/26/2013
Aww... I'm sad now. I loved this fic. It would be neat if you continued, but I get it if you don't :) I'll stick along for the ride no matter what, I may not help much but I'll read it no matter what!
| TakoTamago chapter 7 . 8/1/2012
This is Soo awesome. Only thing. I wish Talas (love!) outfit had been more out there and glitteri and snowy
| Lightmare chapter 7 . 7/11/2012
Oooooohhhhhhh! goodie! I never thoght I would find this fic again! but I'm glad I did! keep going, this fic's hilarious! XD
| Melanie A. J. Kirkland chapter 7 . 6/24/2012
...what ...the hell...max ?
funny and awesome
| Melanie A. J. Kirkland chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
| some stuff chapter 7 . 6/23/2012
Pfff- Hahahha! I can totally picture Max's costume!
Damn, Tyson is good with his unhuman sense of smell
| gizmo5225 chapter 7 . 6/21/2012
Omg they think Max I really a girl? Hehehe... That will be bad news. And I want to see why happens to Parket now... This will be a good read. Los of laughing!
| Nazrita chapter 7 . 6/21/2012
Max is definitely giving Kai a run for his money! XD Max makes a pretty cute schoolgirl, no wonder the All Starz didn't believe him
Looks like Charlotte is stuck with Tyson and Maxie, hopefully Nate will come to her rescue.
Please update soon!
| Nazrita chapter 6 . 6/16/2012
Wow, poor Tyson XD I would've done the same thing if I saw Kai like that! Especially the voice that he used, acting all feminine. He definitely deserved to win with that performance. :D
I can't wait to see what happens next! Will Tyson discover Charlotte's and Nate's secret? I'll be waiting for the next chapter
| some stuff chapter 6 . 6/15/2012
I honestly think that Tyson will be traumatized for life xD
This chapter was BEYOND awesome!
| gizmo5225 chapter 6 . 6/15/2012
Charlotte caught Tyson in the act of trying to break into the Spy Den! This will take some clever explaining... And I agree with Nate, lock Tyson in a closet; nobody will miss him, seeing as how they'll probably be watching Kai being so OOC it makes my lungs hurt from lack of oxygen. I can't wait for next chapter, this keeps developing new problems, yet they always make it through it!
| gizmo5225 chapter 5 . 6/12/2012
Oh god that was just hilarious. Thus chapter came up fast I must say. I liked it! Especially since Tala went back to normal and we learned Kai looks Bette in a dress than Charlotte does!
Kai: Shut up. I could beat you in the same competition
Ra: don't be so sure hot stuff. I Rick my curves where you have none. Now, can we have another chapter soon? Please?