Reviews for A Little Orange Dress
TakoTamago chapter 8 . 11/8/2013
if you need help then I would not mind help? I am not the best but I always have ideas.. and I love Tala so if I can get a way to get more with him then I will do anything to gelp
Yoko Fujioka chapter 8 . 8/28/2013
Honestly I really would like you to continue this, I absolutely adore cross-dressing, and this whole thing just totally seems like something my own OC would do, not to mention the sorta-kinda TyKa back there made me so freaking happy it wasn't even funny XDD

But by 'continue' do you mean collab with you, or just continue being a loyal follower? If it's the former I really hope I'm not to late because I'd really love to!

Like I said, I adore this sort of situation, and if it'd be okay with you I actually already found a way to slip my own OC in, since she's about as crazy as Tala is in this story so I imagine it can't be much worse no matter how much more crack you add XDD

If you know of DA, my username on there is Yoko-tan, PM or message me on there and I can give you a shitton of references of her and my general writing, although you can also just look on my profile on here for that as well XDD

Good day :3
M103752 chapter 8 . 8/27/2013
well thats a shame :(
hope you keep going, but frankly, my creative talents (or lack of) won't be much help here.
gizmo5225 chapter 8 . 8/26/2013
Aww... I'm sad now. I loved this fic. It would be neat if you continued, but I get it if you don't :) I'll stick along for the ride no matter what, I may not help much but I'll read it no matter what!
TakoTamago chapter 7 . 8/1/2012
This is Soo awesome. Only thing. I wish Talas (love!) outfit had been more out there and glitteri and snowy
Lightmare chapter 7 . 7/11/2012
Oooooohhhhhhh! goodie! I never thoght I would find this fic again! but I'm glad I did! keep going, this fic's hilarious! XD
Melanie A. J. Kirkland chapter 7 . 6/24/2012
...what ...the hell...max ?

funny and awesome
Melanie A. J. Kirkland chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
rainbow...tala...nightmares forever
some stuff chapter 7 . 6/23/2012
Pfff- Hahahha! I can totally picture Max's costume!

Damn, Tyson is good with his unhuman sense of smell
gizmo5225 chapter 7 . 6/21/2012
Omg they think Max I really a girl? Hehehe... That will be bad news. And I want to see why happens to Parket now... This will be a good read. Los of laughing!
Nazrita chapter 7 . 6/21/2012
Max is definitely giving Kai a run for his money! XD Max makes a pretty cute schoolgirl, no wonder the All Starz didn't believe him

Looks like Charlotte is stuck with Tyson and Maxie, hopefully Nate will come to her rescue.

Please update soon!
Nazrita chapter 6 . 6/16/2012
Wow, poor Tyson XD I would've done the same thing if I saw Kai like that! Especially the voice that he used, acting all feminine. He definitely deserved to win with that performance. :D

I can't wait to see what happens next! Will Tyson discover Charlotte's and Nate's secret? I'll be waiting for the next chapter
some stuff chapter 6 . 6/15/2012
I honestly think that Tyson will be traumatized for life xD

This chapter was BEYOND awesome!
gizmo5225 chapter 6 . 6/15/2012
Charlotte caught Tyson in the act of trying to break into the Spy Den! This will take some clever explaining... And I agree with Nate, lock Tyson in a closet; nobody will miss him, seeing as how they'll probably be watching Kai being so OOC it makes my lungs hurt from lack of oxygen. I can't wait for next chapter, this keeps developing new problems, yet they always make it through it!
gizmo5225 chapter 5 . 6/12/2012
Oh god that was just hilarious. Thus chapter came up fast I must say. I liked it! Especially since Tala went back to normal and we learned Kai looks Bette in a dress than Charlotte does!

Kai: Shut up. I could beat you in the same competition

Ra: don't be so sure hot stuff. I Rick my curves where you have none. Now, can we have another chapter soon? Please?
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