|Reviews for The Raven|
| scorpin17 chapter 31 . 8/14/2017
| Seth chapter 31 . 3/30/2017
Good story I hope we get more in a sequel
| deanron chapter 1 . 3/15/2017
baka, not bakah
| amerdism chapter 31 . 10/13/2016
Aw it's over, will there be a sequel?
| deathgeonous chapter 31 . 6/24/2016
Been a while since I've read this, and in truth, I never finished it until now. Good fic though. So, thanks for writing this, and bye for now.
| Bill chapter 3 . 2/18/2016
Wow just wow. How the hell does ranma trusting his father as he is suppose to get him put in hell. Sure ranma was too trusting but you have to remember that he had two children points blocked the would have a more adverse effect than just on his libido and anger. Also all he has known is his father as he raised him. Plus his is slightly uneducated due to training. If anything he deserves heaven from all the shit he goes through. Plus it is messed up that he gets raped after dying by a demon. Other wise it is an OK story so far.
| ceroxon chapter 14 . 1/17/2016
Cette review n'a rien à voir avec cette histoire, mais j'avais envie de faire une review.
| SixPerfections chapter 31 . 11/7/2015
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/4/2015
Wow that AN: if i understand it right, you believe that ranma is morally insane and that being chained to a wall and raped repeatedly for a year will make her better?
| Guest chapter 31 . 4/17/2015
Not nearly enough you know, ranks in this ranks crossover. Complete waste of time. Misleading.
| Chaosqueen chapter 31 . 2/20/2015
Just before Raven & Akane are turned into babies I thought Raven should have said
"Look I got screwed out of a childhood by that Panda while Akane got screwed out of training by her Mother's death, so while I understand I'll need training I ask you to please see that I have a childhood as well & Akane gets the training she needs"
When Urd goes to Hild after Raven's Nekoken nightmare/memory I felt Urd's marks should have changed to red (like they do in the series or movie) & she should have suggested Genma being deaged to 6 years old (same as Ranma was) so he could be taught the Nekoken
| maryjane5000 chapter 31 . 2/20/2015
This fic is great & while it keeps you hooked it is unfortunately monotone which takes away a lot from it. I mean there's several things that have no impact yet should have like
1) Ranma shows no reaction to being raped no anger at the demon, no fear of being touched & no relief at being freed
2) Ranma isn't pissed at being a full time girl now or at the fact that fat ass Panda sold her again
3) While Genma's death is some what ok, Ryoga's was lacking. I think they should have had their standard fight then Ranma could have locked him & dropped Pchan at a slaughter house or to a tiger exhibit at the zoo
4) Ukyo is a literally a throw away character, Ranma doesn't go to her (if buried) grave let alone grieve for her best friend
5) Konatsu, Miss Hinako, Happosai & the Kuno's are absent
6) Kasumi & Nabiki aren't scared of Ranma in fact Kasumi basically says "Oh your hear to kill Akane, please come in"
& at least to me it seems like you make a mistake
In the later chapters Raven seems more like the canon version by that I mean Raven seems weaker yet you state that Raven would be stronger because she was Ranma & his strength would give her a boost her power giving her a better chance against Trigon
but as aside from that it still is a great fic
| MadHat886 chapter 1 . 2/16/2015
| Taeniaea chapter 31 . 2/14/2015
| Shinkicker chapter 31 . 11/4/2014
Awesome story! Thanks for posting.