|Reviews for The Raven|
| Guest chapter 31 . 4/17
Not nearly enough you know, ranks in this ranks crossover. Complete waste of time. Misleading.
| Chaosqueen chapter 31 . 2/20
Just before Raven & Akane are turned into babies I thought Raven should have said
"Look I got screwed out of a childhood by that Panda while Akane got screwed out of training by her Mother's death, so while I understand I'll need training I ask you to please see that I have a childhood as well & Akane gets the training she needs"
When Urd goes to Hild after Raven's Nekoken nightmare/memory I felt Urd's marks should have changed to red (like they do in the series or movie) & she should have suggested Genma being deaged to 6 years old (same as Ranma was) so he could be taught the Nekoken
| maryjane5000 chapter 31 . 2/20
This fic is great & while it keeps you hooked it is unfortunately monotone which takes away a lot from it. I mean there's several things that have no impact yet should have like
1) Ranma shows no reaction to being raped no anger at the demon, no fear of being touched & no relief at being freed
2) Ranma isn't pissed at being a full time girl now or at the fact that fat ass Panda sold her again
3) While Genma's death is some what ok, Ryoga's was lacking. I think they should have had their standard fight then Ranma could have locked him & dropped Pchan at a slaughter house or to a tiger exhibit at the zoo
4) Ukyo is a literally a throw away character, Ranma doesn't go to her (if buried) grave let alone grieve for her best friend
5) Konatsu, Miss Hinako, Happosai & the Kuno's are absent
6) Kasumi & Nabiki aren't scared of Ranma in fact Kasumi basically says "Oh your hear to kill Akane, please come in"
& at least to me it seems like you make a mistake
In the later chapters Raven seems more like the canon version by that I mean Raven seems weaker yet you state that Raven would be stronger because she was Ranma & his strength would give her a boost her power giving her a better chance against Trigon
but as aside from that it still is a great fic
| MadHat886 chapter 1 . 2/16
| Taeniaea chapter 31 . 2/14
| Shinkicker chapter 31 . 11/4/2014
Awesome story! Thanks for posting.
| shugokage chapter 31 . 10/17/2014
Great job on this incredible story!
| mrstardust89 chapter 31 . 10/12/2014
this story is great. I wonder though is there a ranma & teen tians crossover with ranma falling in spring of drowned tamaranean girl?
| Veedramon chapter 24 . 10/12/2014
Nice idea with the room.
| Veedramon chapter 23 . 10/12/2014
Well, it could also be the adults dealing with a different crisis.
| Veedramon chapter 22 . 10/12/2014
Well, poor little Ranma, at least she has some years with a group pf friends.
| Veedramon chapter 21 . 10/12/2014
Well, so far it seems quite a lot like the cartoon.
| Veedramon chapter 20 . 10/12/2014
Well, you have made be fear for Ranma in any future OMG/Ranma crossover that I read in the future, well done.
| Veedramon chapter 19 . 10/12/2014
Well, I wonder if the former Ranma will act any different to the cartoon Raven? Because if everything ends as a copy of the show is gonna get quite boring.
| Veedramon chapter 18 . 10/12/2014
Poor Raven, I cant' help but to think of the gods as jerks in this story.