sequel

theif you wish it" line gave me 2004 Peter Pan vibe

stardust movie?

Wow, what a ride. I don’t think I have the proper words to describe my feelings for this story. The way you wrote Loki and approached all of his pain and experience was done just the way I’d imagine it, but had never found anywhere but here. Truly magnificent writingI have shed tears over it. I also loved how you weaved in the stories of the books they read, and the fallen star. It was unique and masterful. Beautifully done.

That was nice

If only, someday, I could write something as beautiful and tearing.

Thank you, from the bottom of my heart: you transmitted so many emotions, dramas and dilemmas, that it is very likely I should read this story, again and again.

Take care, I hope you keep on writing: you truly have a gift!

This was an amazing story. I would really either love an epilogue or a short sequel detailing things like the Asgardian's reactions to them appearing and things like that. One of the most emotionally well written stories I've ever read.

I haven't read much fanfiction in the past few years. Haven't even really been tempted. But then, somehow, I stumbled across this story. AND IT'S BEEN ALL I'VE BEEN ABLE TO THINK ABOUT FOR THE PAST TWO DAYS. Goodness gracious sakes alive!
It is so expertly written, so beautifully crafted. The writing style is like a fairytale. This story latched it's claws onto me and would not let me go and now I'm actually freaking tearing up over here. Good golly.
I am amazed at how flawlessly you tied the story of the Fallen Star into their story. When I realized, after Loki saved Rosa, what was happening I shouted at my screen so loudly that my cat ran away from me. It was such a painfully beautiful ending and my heart is still fluttering from reading it. Holy moly.
I forgot to eat lunch today because I was so wrapped up in this fabulous, heartbreaking and heartwarming tale. I almost called in sick for work yesterday just so I could binge it all then. Sheesh!
Anyways... thank you for crafting this work of art. I am slightly overwhelmed by it and I may need some time to recover. Your writing is so professional and the way everything twists together is downright impressive. If you ever publish a book please do let me know because I would love to read it.
Best wishes to you!

I SO LIKE THIS ENDING BETTER!

Absolutely wonderful fic.. didn't get any sleep tonight, but darn'it it was Worth it! 3

Thank you for your amazing writing!

THIS WAS SUCH AN AMAZING CHAPTER WOW! the moment of realization *chefs kiss*

this might be the shortest story that has ever DESTROYED me emotionally.

Excuse me, I didnt realize how fanfiction worked with personal info.
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I adore this story so much. This will be like my 5th time reading it. The past couple years I've had it on my mind and have told friends about it. And I thought omg I need to just reread it. I've had a hard time reading books recently and dont really know why, I think part of it is because my reading comprehension isnt as good as it used to be. And another part just might be the type of writing. I guess I dont really know what kind of writing is considered 'good'. I have alot of interests and am interested in alot of books, but have not read or finished any of them.
So when I finally decided to reread this story, I was sure I wasnt gonna get far and end up not finishing.
I stayed up til 4am reading this. I love it so much. And I realized, this writing, is good. Like I was completely sucked in and forgot about everything else around me. And even when it was hard to keep my eyes open, I wanted to continue reading so bad. I work at a bookstore, ironically, and people ask me all the time what my favorite book is, and I'm like? Idek.
Now, I instantly think of this story, even tho it's not a book. And I wonder, how do I answer that question to a customer? 'Oh my favorite book isnt a book...its a fanfiction...' lmao which I personally dont think of fanfiction as anything less than a book. But I know others might.
Anyways, I'm unsure if the author will ever see my review, being as it's been so many years, but if they do, I want you to know, I adore this story and will probably reread it multiple times more in my life. I love how theres smaller stories within the story. And that they are really good short stories. And I actully really love the romance in this story too. I'm so used to like paranormal young adult type romances. And I dont really like those anymore. I can tolerate them for the story, I just want more of the world in the book than the romance, but this romance, I truly like. It makes my tummy all happy and my chest hurt. i rememeber sobbing my eyes out and laughing and just having so many emotions all together, at the end.
If the author sees this, i would love to know if you have other work besides these fanfictions. I am highly intrested in seeing more from you. Any other websites or social media. Any books you have published, if u have any, where can I buy them and such. My email is if your intrested in speaking with me and letting me know ways to support you! T-T thank you so much

I have come back to read this chapter more times than I can count because it’s so beautifully written. It’s always absolutely breathtaking.