|Reviews for The Story of a Fallen Star|
| Artemis Sherwood chapter 3 . 5/25/2012
*cries* WHY MUST YOU BREAK MY HEART? WHY, WHY, WHY? I WANT THEM TO BE TOGETHER AND YOU'RE NOT MAKING THAT HAPPEN. *sobs*
| ktmt1120 chapter 3 . 5/24/2012
This chapter was fantastic! Everything about it was just so lovely. The contrast between Loki in private and Loki in public is astounding. Ahh, I'm already anxious for a new chapter. Great job!
| penscape chapter 3 . 5/24/2012
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS CHAPTER. I was squealing when I read the first part of this chapter because the things happening between Loki and Rosa were just so sweet and all that. The part where Loki acted like a total jerk, I honestly didn't expect that because I was hoping he'd dance with her but then that wouldn't be Loki at all. So I think you got him completely back in character. But hey! He was just saving her from getting fired right? If he hadn't stepped in and did that to her then she might have gotten flogged and of course, Loki has his reputation to protect. He had no choice but to do what he did. So really really good job. It was amazing how you turned the uhm 'emotion' (?) in the story changed from really sweet, happy and full of opportunities for a deeper relationship to really bitter and all that. I'd love to know how they overcome this little setback. BUT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEEEEEASE
| Casey K. Si chapter 3 . 5/23/2012
Wow... Seriously, wow! This story is amazing, and almost as beautiful as Loki himself (which is really saying something, since as I'm sure you already know, that man is GORGEOUS). It's so sweet and cute, and then bitter and sad, and all I ask of you is to PLEASE continue it! I know there's the whole thing with how not every story has a happy ending, but that ending was just so sad and heartbreaking, and it came entirely too soon! I mean, poor Loki, and Rosa, and awwww... I'm just gonna go cry now.
| the-lovecat chapter 3 . 5/23/2012
This story is SO GOOD. I wish I could give a full on review but it's so late at the moment. Anyway, please continue!
| Mya Croft chapter 3 . 5/23/2012
Wow... Just... Wow!
| hrlqnn chapter 3 . 5/23/2012
Awh poor Rosa. That was a bit harsh but sometimes Loki is like that. I wonder if he'll apologize or something or how they will make up if they do.
| LifesDarkFire chapter 3 . 5/23/2012
Oh my goodness! This chapter...it was PHENOMENAL! I can't explain how excited I was to read it, and I am amazed at the chapter and the story within it about the witch! I feel that Loki's characterization is perfect, and every character will be a bit ooc since it is fanfiction so I suggest not to worry too much about getting him one hundred percent in character. I also agree with you about Loki's more softer and vulnerable side and the way he was portrayed in this chapter was just wonderful. I loved how her became cold and distant to Rosa in order to save her from those women at the party, I can only hope that they'll resolve their issues soon! I loved Rosa and Loki's interaction in the beginning of the chapter, and when he taught her to dance? Oh, my heart melted at the thought of it. The budding romance that Rosa is beginning to feel for Loki is so sweet, and the way you had her think back to her mother and father's love was a great plot point. Overall just wonderful, amazing, perfection on Loki and Rosa and the part of the chapter with them in it.
As for the story of the witch and the village? It had me on the edge of my seat! I have a feeling that's a creation of your own and can I tell you, WOW! It was a great story, and the very end when Loki realizes that not all stories have happy endings was a great ending to this chapter. I have to say that this is shaping up to be one of the best fanfictions I have read that contains an OC as the other main character. Please keep up the amazing work! I can't wait to read the next installment!
| Fuchsia.Grasshopper chapter 2 . 5/21/2012
So glad you decided to change this up from a one-shot! It's cute how they share stories together and how different they really are in terms of social class!
| deludeddiversion chapter 2 . 5/21/2012
I just want to say, I REALLY love your story and can't wait for more. Please continue!
| halfmyheart chapter 2 . 5/12/2012
This story is absolutely wonderful and so beautifully written! I really enjoyed it and I hope there is more to come. Great work!
| ILuvOdie chapter 2 . 5/12/2012
i love this story _ i can't wait to read more! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
| penscape chapter 2 . 5/10/2012
I read the first chapter before and was really hoping that you'd write more chapters so I was very excited when I saw that you added a new chapter. The story is just amazing. I also love how you describe everything so vividly. And Rosa is an amazing character 'cause she's very real. But what I liked the most was how you showed the other side of Loki's personality and proved that he really isn't that bad. Please write more chapters and update soon!
| Artemis Sherwood chapter 2 . 5/10/2012
AHHHHHHH! THE CUTENESS IS PERFECT! Update soon!
| Artemis Sherwood chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
. IT'S SO PERFECT. I WANT TO WRITE LIKE YOU. XD