Reviews for The Story of a Fallen Star
Mya Croft chapter 2 . 5/9/2012
I actually wanted to squeal at the the end of this chapter! And that's not something I tend to do! I love this story! Please continue!

Happy writing!

noukinav018 chapter 2 . 5/9/2012
I'm so excited that you uploaded another chapter! **squeals**

Very cute indeed. Thx u! thoughts about it!pls don't hate me!

I think Loki is somehow 's the one for chaos of course...but he's complicated self esteem isn't really great.I believe he doesn't like to be seen vulnerable and prefers to hold to a mask. I mean he seems like someone who always holds back.I should point out that liking a girl, a servant no less can likely cause him to struggle greatly to accept his feelings and follow them. It is a bit odd that he reaches out that quick to even hold her hand. Of Rose I can believe that, but not from the Trickster because Rose strikes me as a candid character and as an individual that doesn't hide her emotions.A pretty strong reason for the mischievous deity to feel so entranced by her :D

For a moment I even imagined that he might use his powers in magic for the benefit of knowing her from a safe distance and unwittingly giving hints to those who truly understand him(Frigga?) why he is Thor noticed and that's big :D

Hehe but u're the writer and if that's how u picture Loki, then I'm ok with it(unless u wanna make him rack his brains to understand his actions down to his own boldness and sincerity)

Pls do keep writing :)

Pretty pls with a cherry on top!
Greetingstoyoustrangermeow chapter 2 . 5/9/2012
Your story is so cute :') I love your natural talent at making up stories within a story! The story of the prince and the star actually made me cry! You had my heart at my throat! And Rosa is such an amazing OC! She's kind and sweet and such the opposite of Loki that she is perfect for him! You leave me wanting more of everything! c:
thegirlwhowaited411 chapter 2 . 5/9/2012
AH! This pairing is adorable, and I thoroughly ship them together already. :D
SchadenFreude95 chapter 2 . 5/9/2012
Aw, shucks, they're really cute :P
gitana-bianika chapter 2 . 5/9/2012
A bit out of character Loki, but i like it anyway)) Please update soon:))
ktmt1120 chapter 2 . 5/9/2012
This is so beautifully written. Fantastic job! I really love the dynamic between Loki and Rosa. I look forward to reading more of this fic. :)
Iron Man's Science Bro chapter 2 . 5/9/2012
I loved it! Rosa and Loki are so cute 3

Update soon?
hrlqnn chapter 2 . 5/9/2012
Awhhh that's just... So freaking adorable! Haha I love this
LifesDarkFire chapter 2 . 5/9/2012
I'm so glad that you've decided to make this a chapter story! I can't tell you how excited I was to see the chapter update sitting in my email. You've written another excellent chapter and I'm sure that this story will be wonderful no matter where you go with it. Just go with what feels right and you won't be steered wrong. I loved Rosa and Loki together in this one, imagining them reading together really made me smile it was so sweet. I liked Thor too and how you captured his own character and his relationship with Loki. A wonderful, excellent, superb (all those nice sounding adjectives) second chapter. I can't wait to see where this story will take Loki and Rosa!
LifesDarkFire chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
This was absolutely wonderful! Loki is my favorite character too and his interaction with Rosa was enchanting. I would love for you to continue with this story if you feel so inspired. If not, thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful story! It captures a softer side of Loki, and I would love to read more of him and Rosa.
Ichihara-Mina chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
This made me cry a little at the end. I feel exactly the same towards Loki, I just wish him happiness with all my heart, but I wonder if he would ever allow him to trust someone that much, for he is a liar. *sigh*

But seriously, the idea about that Star and her beloved Prince was sweet as well, actually I liked reading it out loud to myself.

I also liked how you managed to use the language Thor and his people use, I like that kind of phrasing, it sounds beautiful.
BlueNBlackRoses chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Aww, so sweet, this guy needs more love. :)
hrlqnn chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Awh this is sweet :)
thegirlwhowaited411 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Please continue this! These two seem perfect for eachother.:) And the story of the star... did you come up with it all on your own? It's beautiful!
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