Reviews for Broken
Duilin chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
You turned the idea of my insane story and Tolkien's masterpiece into a beautiful poem, short and simple, sweet and bitter, heartbreaking and tender. *cheers* And as it would be for me, I am very, very happy that you wrote it! It's wonderful and marvelous - a picture captured into words.
The Wayfaring Strangers chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
O. My. Valar. I'm sorry, i just can't come up with words to express what this is like. You are becoming an amazing poet. All I can say is, keep writing poetry.

Galad Estel chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
Ah, this was so sad and in a way frightening, especially the "stay forever", but it was so beautiful. :)