|Reviews for Strange Geometry|
| black-misty-sky chapter 1 . 2/12
Help... I can't stop rereading this story... I love it so much... I just want to read it again and again.
| The Unlucky Girl chapter 36 . 12/27/2013
um hi can i just say that this is one one the best goddamned things i've ever read. like, jesus christ I finished reading this months ago and for some reason i keep thinking about it. like, sometimes i'll go to look for fanfiction for this and then remember that there is none because this is already a fanfiction and i'm sorry i'm rambling but I just wanted to tell you that this whole story is brilliant and i love it it's like one of my favorite books of all time ok sorry i'll go now
| Hissery chapter 36 . 10/17/2013
Rosyth and necro-Daniel together 5eva.
I'm ecstatic that they got such a happy(?) ending together, and was even more thrilled that Rosyth was still a creeper. It's a love that transcends dimensions, time, death and ethics. Speaking of which, poor Hy'vel - I guess the most his sacrifice accomplished was to help inspire Maria/Hazel's rebellion? Poor thing, I was pretty attached to him as a side character.
| Miah The Storm Wolf chapter 36 . 10/8/2013
Well, I for one thought the last part was cute and very fitting for these two.
| Sunlit'Interlude chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
So onto the review that I had to delay - I haven't reread everything, but still, it's all really wonderful!
I enjoy how you add humor, comfort, vulnerability and then fear such as in chapter 1 (there are many other examples in the following chapters, but I can't go about listing all of them) where Danny thinks "…not to mention naked" gives a new grounding to a character readers only know from the game. You're mindful of the historical time Danny comes from and use it to your advantage as you show other parts of his mind such as when he focuses on the otherworldly elements of this new world or dangerous aspects of Rosyth: such as his spine, teeth, etc. We almost seem to have never left Brennenburg. Parallels such as how the castles are at first a place of haven, later a hurtful place, and finally destroyed, but never forgotten.
I've reread quiet a bit and really...you are great at storytelling and you usually keep me curious for more. I do think your writing ability can keep growing, but I've seen poorly written published works out there and you are way above them. Even in terms of a story, no matter how creepy, you make it very intriguing to read unlike some of the published garbage. More importantly, it's new. It's an unexplored world! Sure themes have been used before, but you've done it really well. You've created a new race, world, culture...and it wouldn't have been as great without your writing.
And the ending! Wow, what a chapter! Daniels and Rosyth's love is so disturbing, yet, beautiful. I'm really thankful that you have continued this story to the end and shared it with us despite having so many ordeals and obstacles right now. I hope you continue to write!
| jayswing96 chapter 8 . 9/13/2013
Bum, bum buuummmmmm!
| Iggy Valentine chapter 36 . 9/12/2013
It's definitely not like any of the typical romances on fanfiction but heck that's probably why I loved it. Secretly hoped Daniel would've been bonded in a way that tied his life to Rosyth so he'd live longer. If it works out the way Rosyth wants then I'm certain Daniel will be scar-less and ageless. Wonder how freaky that would be for him.
Still pretty amazing that they spent more time apart than together, blast it all they took ages to get their act together. And Dan had three suitor like Justine. (they were all messed like them too.)
Hope to see more since you're the biggest contributor to Amnesia!
| Sunlit'Interlude chapter 36 . 9/12/2013
Splendid. Everything was tied up in the end neatly, and ending it with the creepy...well, that was the finishing touch the story needed. I have been very busy (and have had little time for myself), but I'll read the entire story tomorrow and finish my review. I was really happy to get to read this darling conclusion. At the start I was feeling slight disappointment...till the realization that Daniel was in a dream with the emperor, etc. The rest of the chapter just soared afterwards.
I hope things are getting better for you - particularly your health.
| Random Riter11 chapter 36 . 9/4/2013
Very well done. Thank you for writing this, it was a great read.
I hope your health improves, and I hope to see more from you too.
| Phoenixette101 chapter 36 . 9/4/2013
(Too lazy to log in) SORRY FOR THE LATE REVIEW! School and such. And I'll be frank, that was the best ending. Happy, in-character, and horribly sweet. I do hope your feeling better, hospital can be nasty. I do hope Rosyth and Daniel live for as long as possible together. They deserve it...they truly do. And this will always be one of my favorite stories. I look forward to your next one!
| KitsuneMagic48 chapter 36 . 9/4/2013
What an incredible story. The ending was sweet in such a creepy way. It would be nice if he were able to live like Maria did and regain consciousness and all that jazz! Great story and I hope for more!
| lildark7 chapter 36 . 9/4/2013
Amazing as always, loved every word of it!
I'm so happy to read everything turned out fine for Hazel and the rebellion, and Rosyth's finally back too
I hope you're better again!
| WildIce22014 chapter 36 . 9/4/2013
This was marvellous hun *hugs*
Call it cliché and sappy, but just like how Daniel and Rosyth are proud of Hazel, I am so proud of you for writing this and finishing it all the way to the end. No words can describe what an amazing you author you are and contributing some of the best Amnesia fanfics on this site. I hope you continue to write more Amnesia fanfics (possibly with the new characters once A Machine for Pigs is finally released), but if this is where Daniel and Alexander’s adventures end, then this hun, was your magnum opus.
Everything was wrapped up nicely and once again I love your open endings. There really is something appealing about a grand tale that has no written conclusion, it lets the reader continue the story themselves and leaves the story open for different interpretations.
(Also, Rosyth turning Daniel into one of his creations...CALLED IT (somewhat). Although if Rosyth ever goes down that route then Daniel would be immortal just like Hazel, meaning their positions have just been reversed. Daniel will now outlive Rosyth…Maybe it’ll be like the film Bicentennial Man (1999), where Daniel chooses to die at the same moment as Rosyth so they can go on together. That would be sweet :’)
Curse you for writing a story with a happy ending! My feelings can’t handle how sweet and wonderful this is! DX
*Hugs* I’m not sure what’s going on with the hospital, but stay strong and if you ever get bored and need someone to talk to I’m just a message away, or even a skype call away.
| Lanny-Sama chapter 36 . 9/4/2013
I love the creepy ending... I love this story as well, you took something nice, and embroadened it ! 3 LURVES!
| sascha024 chapter 36 . 9/3/2013
I'm in tears! Thank you for finishing this story. That was a lovely ending; I was dreading that Rosyth might have been killed, but Danny got his wishes and he deserves it.
I find it amazing that Amnesia: The Dark Descent inspired such a complex story, and I can only hope that A Machine for Pigs will entertain as much to gamers and story writers.