Reviews for LarryBoy's Big Secret
WilliamPennerson chapter 2 . 2/12/2014
What the BACH is this! I just started reading, and then I went, "WHOA! WHAT!? CLAWED FEET!?" Was this supposed to be in the Gargoyles section? I just can't get past this! Seriously, unless this is a crack fic or was supposed to startle the audience, please give your audience some warning before throwing things in out of left field at the beginning of your story... like, say, mentioning first that LarryBoy is (for some reason) a lion.
Actually, is this a crack fic? This doesn't look like any VeggieTales fanfiction I've ever seen...
Also, breaking a vase just to be malicious isn't really 'mischievous'; if she caused problems but was tricky and clever about it, that would probably be closer to 'mischievous' while also being troublesome.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
breasts? they're veggies! veggies with breasts sounds scary! is she a villiain?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Why are they like lions?
SofiaGirl12 chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Cool story intro! And are they supposed to be human in this story?