|Reviews for Tatter Tale|
| mimic shalle chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
huhn... yeah, I agree with something you said in your monologue; this would be better if it were multi-chaptered. It'll give you more room for character development and the whatnot.
On another note, you may want to reread this again. It isn't too major, just some things off here and there, like this:
"Don't you afraid of death?"
It should be something like: "Aren't you afraid to die?" or "Don't you fear death?" or rephrase it if you must.
...hmm, really, this could be a great piece if it were multi-chaptered, maybe you could...? haha, that's just me, but seriously it'd be good if you did, it's practice and well, it'll be a nice addition to this section. :3
| HubrisP chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Excellent work, would you be interested in working on a Last Remnant fic with me? Keep up the excellent work!