Reviews for Could We Have Something More?
Call Me. MIRA chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
Oh God, I dont know if ive ever felt this embarrassed reading a story :) They're both just soo nieve its unbearable. Either way i loved the story, KA-WA-II
Syaoran-Lover chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
At first I thought this was a weird sequence you chose, and I couldn't help but squirm at some passages. But I'm glad I read it. The uncertainty of a first time (though I find it hard to believe they wouldn't know a thing about sex... OK about gay sex, but sex in general?), really cute. I especially loved how you didn't jump right to the pleasure.. and how you actually described the awkwardness. Not my kind of topic, but you did it rather well, and for that I admire you. :)
And hardly any typos or errors! *happy