|Reviews for Little Darlings continued|
| ana bani chapter 3 . 4/5
in chapter 4 destiny sleeps over with sunset for few days cause her house is being done up.
release album , Davie asks sunset out and jack and destiny are official couple ,[kiss a lot in next chapter 4] [maybe Kate and Danny [not sure it'll work] shipping names are destiny and jack :jestiny
sunset and davie dunset or savie . tip continue chapter until their grown up and have kids ,leave on a thoughtful note of their children thoughts and ideas when they grow up ,do their kids sequel
| Ana bani chapter 2 . 4/4
Do a lot of jestiny and them having romantic fun kissing dunset as well
| Ana bani chapter 3 . 4/4
Destiny should come for a sleep over due to her house being done up. Kate hooks up with danny (mite not work). Destiny and sunset and ace and sweetie have a bath together in the huge bath and talk about stuff ,( not minding about being nude). U should get sunset with davie and destiny with jack ,shipping jestiny and dunset or savie. Do quite a lot of dates and kissing. Do the chapter till the grow up and have kids ,do the bedroom process, and leave it there
| ana bani chapter 2 . 4/4
i think u should put a bit more love between jestiny [get it ] so boyfriend and girlfriend kissing
please read this SPECIAL I LOVE YOUR STORY
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
Hey this book is really good and I hope that whoever wrote this little fiction does more chapters
| tash chapter 3 . 12/2/2014
hey, this is really good, please write more!
| RosaSilvermist chapter 3 . 9/8/2014
This is a great story, please write more!
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/23/2014
OMG This is such a good spin off! Please update and maybe make jack and destiny to out together? ;) I think the two of them are so cute together!
| OMLG chapter 3 . 3/4/2014
SO AMAZING PLEASE PLEASE ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER
| Lucy chapter 3 . 12/19/2013
Chapter 4 ITS EPIC!
| AwesomeDolphin chapter 3 . 12/21/2013
omg, I love JW books and I can only find little darlings, are there anymore? Anyways, I love your story so far! Please continue! :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
"You are my Destiny..." I clapped hard for my sister. "Hey,ok, Des that was awesome but I need you to walk towards your dad and look straight into his eyes, ok?" Debs stepped backwards and gave dad a thumbs up. Dads voice was deep and eery but it got better as he sang. Destiny walked straight up to him and sang out her heart. "Yes! That was perfect-" she glanced at her watch-" ok, i better let you go, i undersrand you have a recording at the studio in 20 minuted. Same time tomorrow, yeah?" She left without waiting for a reply. I glanced at destiny and she was hugging dad and dad seemed so very comfortable with her. More comfortable than he ever felt...with me. Destiny caught my eye. She gave dad a final hug and strode camly over. "Hi, Sunny." Suddenly she feel like my sister, she was like Sweetie, pretty, skinny and slim in a good way, everything she wore somehow always suited her. Yes. I was messing up the family I didn't fit in. I was ugly and my dark hair had no shine whatsoever my tummy always seemed floppy and even if I starved myself for 2 weeks, nothing happened. I coulnt seem to find a perfect outfit.
The studio wasnt big. It was huge. I couldnt wait to tell Jack. All the showstar bizz was making me dizzy but I couldnt quite get wyy Sunshine was sulking.
This was my Second day and she didn't reall seem to want me here. Its like / had let her down. "Hey, Des, could you come here a sec?" Danny asked. "Sure." "Great, ok I want you to sing the whole song first si we can record it and the add extras in the middle. '"Cool what song, the song Red Carpet, y'know the onw Sunset wrote." I loved that song it was like a nicki minaj song it was upbeat. I quickly trabbed the big beats and sang into the mike hanging down from above. I uad to hmmm the beginnig. "Hmmmmm, hmmmmmmm, hmmmmm. Hmmmmmmm, hmmmmmmmm. Some people calling, smile over here honey, some camera clicking over there. Peopleare screaming, it feels like I dreaming bt I'm on a carpet eh eh eh eh not just any carpet eh eh eh I'm on the red carpet ehe ehe eh eh oh oh oh its getting me down bt I'm on the top nd itc causing rows bt I can overcome at I'm felling blue and
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/13/2013
Please continue! I love how it's written! Please continue! It sounds amazing! Maybe you could get Jack and Destiny dating, that would be awesome!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
i really liked it it is a brill book i love little darlings
| Fred and George Weasley Twins chapter 3 . 6/7/2013
Oh im sooooooooo looking forward to the next chapter and would love to be able to write lke this