|Reviews for White Lightning|
| Hummingbird2 chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Talk about a comedy of errors! *Snort* I could easily see this as an episode, thank you.
"In a town named Hell For Certain! Must be devil's food cake."
I love that line! : D
| Elleree chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
I smiled throughout this entire story. I loved the banter between the boys as it rang authentic. Lovely job. :3
| Ghislaine Emrys chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
Very funny story-lots of LOL moments. I kept picturing the "rat" in "Bad Night in Big Butte" while reading about the squirrel. Best line was "This must be how bounty hunters feel." And funniest line was when the child asked what was in the box and Kid said: "Aggravation..."
| InsideOutlaw chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
This was hysterical! I liked the opening with all the bickering. Well done. I also like the whole Leroy/Leon exchange. Thanks for the laughs.