Reviews for Give It Your Best Shot
LadyGrimR chapter 30 . 11/27/2022
super intense.
mumphie chapter 30 . 8/6/2022
Wow. So much hanging in the wind.
A wonderfully intriguing and interesting story. I truly wish that you had been able to continue! It's my fervent wish that you had planned on people living...people who are important to Harry. I know authors want realism...but readers want things to go better than in canon. So I wish for your mojo to return, your muse to laugh gleefully at new ideas to come, and for characters to come into their own.
Imperfect-BlackAngel chapter 30 . 10/27/2021
Please , please , please just complete this fic.
adolebitque chapter 30 . 10/22/2021
Good story, hope you are able to continue this!
kyoshi chapter 30 . 7/25/2021
What happened to the author? Did you give up on this story?
Li-Ion78 chapter 4 . 6/13/2021
This got complicated real quick
Bb34 chapter 1 . 4/2/2021
This was interesting
Seraphy64 chapter 1 . 3/19/2021
Sigh. And It started out so well. Then you turned your Harry stupid. If he was half as experienced as you made him seem, he should have had James on his ass, disarmed and stunned the second he showed any aggression.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2021
now THAT is how you start a story

“Fuck!”

perfect.
Siruislady chapter 1 . 8/10/2020
I read the whole thing. Please update. Loved it.
Sonia25 chapter 30 . 6/15/2020
The pace is so slow. Only thoughs and explanation with little talk and action makes this ff utterly boring.
Sonia25 chapter 26 . 6/15/2020
What happened to the law suit that harry was filling against bones. Mad eye moody was insulting his entire family infront of him and harry was silent. For someone who was supposed to be this grey lord and all. He takes shit from everyone. What a pathetic ff. Highly boring and uninteresting
the real narnia chapter 30 . 5/11/2020
well damn.
it's been years since you've updated but dear God I hope you decide to continue this and update soon. it's incredible and I can't stop crying.
I actually thought that harry was going to use breaking the seal as an excuse to say that he was seeing possible visions of the future (rather than the sug with ignotus) because he'd be able to share a but more information with people then.
and I can't believe how short it is in the timeline! you've written so much and we haven't even had the world cup yet! (speaking of which, if the death eaters do attack, I'm looking forward to harry killing a bunch of them)
this story is really something, and I dearly hope it continues. I can't wait you see what more would happen! I look forward to the next chapter! happy writing!
A.the.great chapter 30 . 4/6/2020
Please please please update, your a brilliant author and this is an epic fanfiction
DawnScarlet19610 chapter 30 . 3/13/2020
Absolutely fantastic. I binged this entire story in one night. Didn't get a wink of sleep. I'm so sad you never finished it. I don't know if you'll even see this review, but I just want to thank you for such a great read. I hope one day you will come back to continue. If you do, I'll be reading!
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