|Reviews for Give It Your Best Shot|
| Klaudia.SOL.Tatiana chapter 30 . 2/26
I'm waiting impatiently for an update :)
| Dark Viris chapter 15 . 2/19
Great story so far
| Prof. H.J Potter chapter 30 . 2/17
Thans giving has come And gone. So has winter.
| greymouser chapter 30 . 2/15
This is so good! So different from other hp fic, and so well written. Update please!
| Guest chapter 30 . 2/10
Really enjoying this - hoping that it hasn't fallen off your radar. Such an inventive start, I'm really looking forward to seeing where it goes. TTFN
| oliveoil889 chapter 30 . 2/5
Love your story, especially the detail you've been putting into the Pervell family legacy and stuff. I can't wait to read more!
| MotheroftheStar chapter 17 . 1/29
Um, hi. I don't know if you'll read this, but I love your fic a lot and I really like this chapter in particular, because of how you explained Parseltongue, the Peverells and the Slytherin connection to the Potters. I actually did a family tree based on this and put it on deviantart, I hope you don't mind. It's here: art/The-Peverell-Bloodline-430335441
Anyway, thanks :)
| dogbertcarroll chapter 4 . 1/24
Needless complications, he has knowledge and skill that are so far beyond his present self they would serve as proof.
| Myr chapter 30 . 1/22
| Kennilworthy Thisp chapter 2 . 1/20
It's nice to see you're not going with with the Stroppy!James trope. It's a good start so far!
| Fullmetal11791 chapter 17 . 1/17
I'd first like to say that I'm enjoying the plot and characters part of the story. However, I feel I should inform you that when it comes to explanations, you are extraordinarily long winded. As in, skim entire pages worth of explanations because it's not relevant to the story. Sure, you can come up with a ten page explanation on death wards, or create a thirty page history on the peverel family. And you might find that quite interesting. However, it just does not read well, especially when the reader could understand the point that "death wards are lethal, almost impossible to get around, and consume your soul" in a few paragraphs. No in depth explanation needed. Same with the peverel family history. I understand you are trying to portray the magnitude of their importance, but long winded explanations suck to read. Everyone knows what a ward is, they know what they do by their name, and if there is an innovative idea to be had, a paragraph will suffice, because really? It's not important to the plot.
That said, I really am enjoying the fact that this isn't one of those redundantly boring stories where Harry's parents bitch and moan about how Harry doesn't love them and if they try just a bit harder he'll come to the light. I think you've done a fantastic job writing James Potter as a smart realistic person, and keeping Lily out of it was also a nice move.
| hentai18ancilla chapter 30 . 1/13
Ah...the casualties in war...
| allard chapter 30 . 1/7
Your paced balance between character development and plot development is one of the most impressive HP Fanfiction stories I have ever read. Stay Cool and Calm and Carry On!
| w- easy enough chapter 30 . 1/4
Awww! This chapter was heartbreaking. Harry is making so many sacrifices and has no time to appreciate what he's regained with his integration, though I realize that because he integrated with his other self he's different ... but still, his saving people mindset makes me so proud and so sad. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| rikuofdarkness45 chapter 30 . 12/30/2013
Damn O.O this story is intense. I freaking love it!