|Reviews for Days Without Rain|
| Guest chapter 55 . 10/2
It was a amazing fan fic . I could not stop reading it .
| Guest chapter 29 . 9/27
This chapter is lovely. My fav so far. I want to say more but I'm on my phone and I need to sleep :(
| Guest chapter 28 . 9/27
Hmm I am liking how you write mai - a lot of the time, people twist her into that clichéd harpy, shrew that women fall into when they're not the love interest. I might hate it even more than the women has no interest in the "chosen one" yet somehow is together with him at the end of the movie. Actually that's a lie I hate so many of those stereotypes and I can't decide which is worse. Kyoshi doesn't need that extra "i" ( if you ever intend to edit this again). I like the idea as mai as a kyoshi warrior - in the boiling rock she implies her allegiance to azula was only fear but we see the flashbacks - they were friends once but I think mai experienced how cruel azula could be and coupled with her political family, she has a facade; if azula had sense weakness she'd pray on it. I like how for one you wrote mai as being aware (unlike many Zutara fics) and she's intelligent and (pretends, I think, in matters if the heart ) to be confident. You write her with service to her character and not just a Zutara obstacle and I thank you for that
| Guest chapter 25 . 9/27
Ok I was like you brought back haru? Nice. Then you brught jet back. Damn.
/"You're not the Fire Lady," Zuko shot back.
"Not yet," Katara smirked.
/ I am loving this banter
The captains a woman? Love her even more.
If haru didn't want them to follow him, why call out? Why didn't katara apprehend zuko's wannabe assasin?
| Guest chapter 24 . 9/27
interesting pov change. and does that mean the fire nation drought is a consequence of weather bending? im liking the captain
| Guest chapter 23 . 9/27
i love the little pieces of suki and sokka we get
| Guest chapter 22 . 9/27
damn just throwing wrench in the zutara so casually. there is something so intriguing about the trio’s backstory
| Guest chapter 20 . 9/27
tbh i thought they would get toph to interrogate the council already and katara to have made it rain?
| Guest chapter 17 . 9/27
toph & zuko friendship is too pure
| Guest chapter 16 . 9/27
i liken the azula/ozai hate to that lady in hp that wears pink all the time (not a huge hp fan tbh)/voldemort and how the first thing people they say they hate in hp is her- she’s tangible; he’s more abstract (the untouchable icon i suppose). the sokka renunion was so sweet
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/27
legitimately everything wrong with kataang right there! when i first watched atla i cringed at any kataang mentions tbh i can’t!
| Guest chapter 10 . 9/27
but it’s not her fault? he left though. he doesn’t get to be mad when he didnt even say when he’ll be back/where he is going. like the whole series is about him running away and never facing things.
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/27
i am loving the zutara this chapter (although i have a feeling i wont like the ka/taang relations next chapter. this is one of the reasons why i think they work so well - they complement each other. bloodbending isn’t evil unless you have evil intentions and aang, like you says sees things in black and white. he refuses to compromise on his views, even when impractical and can be more harmful in the long run
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/27
i thought they figured out that the assassination attempts were to start war profiteering again last chapter? was looking forward to suki sokka at the beginning of this chapter but now i’m worried :/
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/27
this is a really nice, nitty, gritty, more mature take on the war. (not that i think zutara is "too dark” i mean katara literally compared aang to momo; they’re like siblings i can’t do kataang at all) what i really like about this chapter is 1) how bamf they are talking about assasination attempts 2) how casually they are about how the gaang are canonically the best of their elements (apart from lok but i disregard that like they did all the women’s personalities (bryke)) 3) the kataang discussions
in past chapters ive liked 1) katara (of course) and her determination 2)iroh !