White.

To misquote David Banner: Don't get me drunk. You wouldn't like me when I'm drunk. All the suppressed emotions come out. I'll stick to virgin pina coladas and soft-drink "beersroot, ginger, birch, butter).

Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee update? Please?

What a stupid relationship talk yo had with Alice and Bella. Obviously by the fact you have Bella be start to 'sway' to it.

You obviously think Alice thinking is in the right. Which is stupid. They threw away the uniqueness of their relationship cause Alice thinks she could be better in bed? That's asinine. Of all the reasons to have a open relationship, that's the most idiotic reason I have ever read or saw.

Literally it's actually getting on my nerves thinking about it. If they wanted to fuck other people, have them be honest about it.

Are you going to finish the story!?

I loved this story but am sad that‘s not finished. I hope you will be kissed by a muse and you are able to write more.

Bellas awkwardness is kind of cute...Edward is able to lead her on...and I would so much like a chapter with Bella learning bj with all this different women...oh my imagination is runing wild!

That makes no fucking sense tho... If they love each other, they find out what they are missing on their own, not let your wife/husband fuck some other people.

That's absolutely asinine and their explanation made not a lick of fucking sense.

'Oh I love my husband but what If there are things that out there we haven't experienced? let's fuck other people?' Oh come the fuck on. She should use the 'slut' word cautiously from now on cause now Alice is actually a slut.

Please don't be the end. No no no. It's good, it's funny, but it's incomplete. Please try to get back into finishing this.

Mickey

I'm with bella on chapter 18. ALice is trying to make it sound like bella is just too naïve to understand when really alice and jasper are just being hoes. Sorry but that's what it comes down to.

I will definetly look up bunga bunga!

So so gutted this wonderful story hasn't een finished :-(

Wow, wonderful chapter one! The Debra Winger's analogy cracks me up!

A

So disappointed to realize this story has been abandoned! Over a year and a half and nothing...too bad, I've always enjoyed your work. What happened?

Will this ever be completed?