|Reviews for Greatly Exaggerated|
| MorningAngel9 chapter 15 . 3/20
I loved this story. It was so fun, i loved the twins they were the perfect addition to Logan and Veronica :D
| CGirl2009 chapter 15 . 3/16
| Guest chapter 15 . 2/5
| FatPatricia515 chapter 14 . 12/28/2013
I just wanted to say I adore this story. I love the characterizations of Morgan and Lo because seriously a little girl following around Keith Mars learning the tells of when people are lying and how to fingerprint her father just gah! So adorable. And a surly little Logan, so cute. The idea that Veronica wouldnt be with anyone else but him and wouldnt be afraid of loving him, because he died and so she had already experienced the worst thing that could happen in their relationship just I love the domestic bliss you created.
I loved the unexpected twist of Mr. C being the bad guy because well you didnt have to make any of the reasons for him to be pissed at Logan up. He never did have to deal with that fall out. And I liked Logan's dream sequence in deciding where his entire life would be different with Dick being all Zen. Just so much to gush about.
But I love this story. I cant wait to read the updates on Sometimes and Neptune and whatever else you write in the future.
| Scandalpants chapter 15 . 8/11/2013
Just came across this older one of yours and wanted to let you know I had a lot of fun reading it. Morgan and Lo may have been a bit old for their ages, but I was able to let go of that and just enjoy the characters you created for them. The opening scene with Morgan and Logan-the fingerprinting and scathing remark about how bad he is at surveillance had me cracking up.
You are totally right about the scene with Mr. C, Logan and Dick at target practice never coming into play again. Rob Thomas and crew were really tight with their pacing so it makes me wonder if they changed a story line in there to render it irrelevant.
The Dick love was also great. (Sorry, I just can't help myself with his name.) It is a little creepy to imagine dinner with a Logan mannequin every week, but it made sense since it was Dick made. Would have skeeved me out, instead of making me laugh, if anyone else had done it..
Thanks for the LoVe and happy ending. Had a good time.
| jigsawjazzz chapter 2 . 7/28/2013
| Camille chapter 15 . 7/7/2013
Great story! I feel so bad I haven't read it before!
Morgan and Logan junior are so cute, totally like their parents!
I totally picture Logan leaving for Veronica's safety!
I was completely glad when you made Veronica apologize for having taken Logan and his love for her for granted (I hope they'll do the same in the movie but I doubt about it).
The Logan and Logan junior interactions were PERFECT! They are too much alike for Logan junior to simply accept Logan in their life.
Morgan is so like Veronica, it's so funny! This last chapter ended your story perfectly even if I'm sad that your story is done. When I saw "Logan Junior Echolls Age 12" at the beginning of the chapter I realized it was the end and I was like NOOOOOOO, It can't be done yet! Your story is just that amazing!
| Lady Greenwood chapter 15 . 6/10/2013
I have read all but one of your stories now and have found them to be well written great pieces of work , I nearly never read this one because I skipped chapters and thought where did the kids come from? They not Logan's ( and I'm a true LoVe Lover!) but on starting at the beginning I have to say WELL DONE! I love it, keep doing more stories. Xxxx
| Jodi chapter 15 . 6/3/2013
Loved this story! So great! Thanks for sharing. Can't wait to read your others!
| amywrites chapter 15 . 5/30/2013
This is one of the better written future kids fics. I've read quite a few but this one stands out and if it says anything it's the only one of its kind that I've favorited so far. I think the twins are adorable and I can clearly picture them in my head. I can overlook that they're uber mature 5-year-olds because look who spawned them, c'mon. I love the personalities you've given them and how they mirror traits from each parent. Logan's evolving relationship with Lo especially...so endearing and perfect.
"Hey." Logan said, looking at his son knowingly. "I understand how you feel. You and I are exactly the same."
Lo met his eyes in surprise. "We are?"
"We are. Me and you...we feel things too deeply. Your mother and Morgan can turn off those feelings in order to get the job done. But you and I? Our 'happys' are happier and our 'sads' are sadder and our 'mads' are madder. When we love, we love with all our heart and when we hate… Well, let's just say people like us shouldn't hate and leave it at that."
This. Soooo gooood.
I loved that this was written from Logan's POV; like we're discovering this new life along with him. The scene with the surprise guest at Friday night dinner was great stuff. Dick and his Logan mannequin made me smirk, squee, and just pfft at the bromance of it all. So sweet. Loved that and loved Mac's reaction and the in the closet joke, bwahaha. I may have laughed a little too hard at that one. The epilogue was awesome sauce. The only negative thing I can think of is that I wish this story was longer. I want you to bring these kids through high school! And I want to see Logan and Veronica as an old married couple. So if you're ever on board to revisit this as a sequel...nudge nudge.
| jacksperluvr chapter 15 . 5/19/2013
| Mischief101 chapter 15 . 4/8/2013
this story was amazing. I loved every part of it. Although the kids did seem old for their age who cares it worked. I loved Morgan she is exactly how I would picture a daughter of Veronica's. The best part though was probably the epilogue I loved the situation with the principal and Troy. So funny. Thank you for writing and sharing this story.
| PlrtzGlrb chapter 15 . 3/25/2013
I completely and totally enjoyed this story. You are so good at plot! And character. And dialogue. And writing. How do you do that?
| Ultrawoman chapter 15 . 3/9/2013
Wow. I stumbled upon this story on somebody else's favourites list this morning. I was just curious as to what it was about, I planned to save it to read later if it looked interesting... instead I read it all at once! Well, more or less, I only stopped for lunch :)
I love it. I mean I really love the whole story. Logan leaving to keep Veronica safe, the whole fake death thing, her having his twins whilst he was gone. Its all just... epic, to coin a phrase ;)
The twist with Dick's father? So didn't see that coming, which makes it even more cool, because twists you do see coming aren't half so much fun. It made sense for it to be the Russian mob after Logan, but this also worked. His kids saving him? The most awesome and adorable thing in the history of ever!
Loved this Epilogue too. Stories with fledgling or recently re-established relationships as well as stories with small children need flashforward Epilogues, in my opinion. I use them a lot. Yours was a perfect end to your wonderful tale. Young Morgan, Trent who is Mini!Troy, and the next generation Logan & Lilly. I do, I love it! :)
Thank you for a very enjoyable read.
| R18P chapter 15 . 3/8/2013
I am following another of your fantastic stories, you are really an amazing writer, from the emotions & dialogues of the characters, I was hooked from start to finish, the story itself is great, veronica had Logan's twins after he "died" you come up with really interesting & different ideas for stories.
The twins are great, mini versions of their parents, but just the right amount, snark & cuteness & chatter. Veronica's & friends keeping Logans memory alive at weekly dinners was great, Dick with little Lo, was really sweet but the chat up lines had me in fits of laughter. Mac, Dick, Duncan etc although there not In the story a lot, I felt it was enough to give a glimpse of their bonds & interactions, while not overshadowing the main characters as a new family unit. I really liked the epilogue told from Morgans & Lo's point of view.
As always you never let down with the LoVe,
Thanks for your story ( made work bearable today )