Reviews for Payback
FF8cerberus chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
Monster the Vamelfaer chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
Aww! :3 Awesomely funny and cute! I love it! I kind of like how you didn't add any dialog. It almost seems to get it across a little more. Though I'm not going to lie, the VVVVV thing got a little annoying after a while. I think it might have been better if you just used a line... But besides that, awesome!
Regrem Erutaerc chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
All I can say is... Awwww... :D
Waterpokemon chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
Good but could you carry on. PLEASE! chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
my only question- was bb doing it on a purpose when he flies into rae? because if he wasn't, then he hardly deserves retaliation of any sort against his person, no matter how pleasant such action was.

still, cute.
Vatala Darkmist chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
I Love this. Mostly because it's awesome. A little because you added the Archie comics. Still.
Densharr chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
Alright, I'll say it.

This is adorable.
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