Reviews for The Last Mission
Guest chapter 10 . 7/9/2020
Love the story
Guest chapter 16 . 9/27/2019
I LOVE YOUR STORY!
Guest chapter 14 . 9/27/2019
I love it! can’t wait to read more!
Guest chapter 13 . 9/27/2019
Your sister doesn’t know what she’s talking about. This story is amazing!
Guest chapter 10 . 9/27/2019
Girl. I really want the baby to be a girl!
Guest chapter 7 . 9/27/2019
I love your writing! (And your review threats were pretty intimidating!)
sunniebelle chapter 16 . 4/24/2018
This was a great story and I loved every moment! I especially loved the part when they underestimated Deryn's deadly abilities and the "BIG MISTAKE!" comments she was silently making towards the German soldiers! I was all but shouting at them "You are all Dummkopfs!" lol
sunniebelle chapter 1 . 4/24/2018
Oh, boy! What a great start to the story! My heart is racing and I'm already hooked. Great writing!
Hey That's Cool chapter 13 . 8/30/2017
(Talking about different languages)
Me: *blabbering about history*
My Roommate (in Dutch): Why are we speaking Dutch again?
Me: I have no idea.
Roommate: Great.
Hey That's Cool chapter 8 . 8/30/2017
I'm not alone! Convos with fictional characters is legit my specialty.
guest chapter 13 . 11/26/2016
Your story is awesome!
:)
Grace chapter 13 . 6/22/2016
THIS STORY IS AMAZING I LOVE LEVIATHAN(mainly Dalek ;) AND HARRY POTTER AND PERCY JACKSON!
Grace chapter 16 . 6/21/2016
Great story!
connor1504 chapter 16 . 10/30/2014
I like the ending, everything fit together like a puzzle, and while the newkirk thing felt a little tacked on, it wasn't bad. Overall I really enjoyed the story, and look forward to reading your other works
connor1504 chapter 5 . 10/30/2014
Only problem I had in the chapter is how you mentioned the soldier being stabbed in the knee and then continuing to be able to fight a trained swordsman. One of the most important parts of Fencing is the legwork, and being stabbed in the knee sorta damages ones ability to fight, other than that though, this was a wonderful chapter
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