Reviews for dying is an art
The Pearl Maiden chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Another beautiful one-shot. Truly.
domilue chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Wonderful story and so nicely written. You really captured the complexity of Loki very well. Thanks so much for sharing.
Seriously Yours chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
Beautifully written.
meowfactory chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
Ah, this is so full of yearning, and so lovely. I love the recurring mentions of breathing and breath, the visceral things like hands clenching into fists, and the characterisation, seriously, I can't even.

"Loki does not see this. He does not see anything he has not calculated for."

Ughh. I have no words for your words, so I'm just going to quietly sit here and hope you write more for this fandom. c:
Dance Elle Dance chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
This was very nice. I think you did a great job at getting into Loki's head. Amazing work!
Sepsis chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
"where he had pressed his hand hard to his mouth to stifle the shame once, when Odin had announced Thor to be his heir, his teeth sinking deep into flesh"

God.. You really captured him perfectly.. That was amazing!
Shipperwolf chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
OH MY GOD. This is amazing!

Very well done. It was beautiful. You captured Loki magnificently.

Fantastic job!