Reviews for First Time on the Enterprise
Robin's Wife chapter 5 . 6/28/2013
Hahaha ahhh Google Translate always the ever reliable translation device, I LOVE IT, I use it all the time. And I'm sorry I'm SO late on reviewing! I've been pretty forgetful lately, another good chapter I just finished When I Met The Riddler and now I get to continue on ANOTHER amazing Star Trek story, Wendy and Pavel's relationship is really getting interesting, you're spot on, on Pavel's character and your characterization is perfection, one or two grammatical errors but that's all, keep up the amazing work

-Robin's Wife
xalwaysxx13 chapter 5 . 6/18/2013
This is great, keep up the good work! You kept Wendy a realistic character and maintained an order of events going on at all times (which is awesome)!

And I'm feeling a bit freaked out because I myself am writing a fanfic for this fandom that involves the crew going on a planet like this and he exact same thing happens, just with five people getting lost and it was Uhura that got hurt (because SOMEONE has to get hurt). :o

I must be psychic.

Anyways, I love, love, love, it and I praise your literacy :DDD
IzabellaSanguine chapter 4 . 6/12/2013
Awwwwww Checkov is SO CUTE! I love the relationship that you've built up. I really hope they get to stay together and I hope that she gets to stay on the Enterprise. Please update soon x
CallingTheMaker chapter 2 . 12/9/2012
Awwwww I love this story! It's so cute, I'm super excited for the next chapter!
Robin's Wife chapter 2 . 12/8/2012
AW.

Pavel and Wendy, I love them as a couple. Seeing how soft and gentle Pavel is to her, and his secret crush is great. It made me smile that he was so heart broken when she didn't show at first because it showed how much he cared for her. Everything was perfect. And I love how their relationship is progressing, great as always!

-Angel
SmillyReaper chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Pssh! You should totally update this!
Robin's Wife chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
I like this! I'm no expret on Star Trek to be honest, but! I Love this! Its so cute that Chevok has a crush on Wendy.

I love the way Chevok saids Wendy's name. Heh Vendy!

I love this! Kirk seems like the kind of guy that would put chevok through blind dates! I can't wait to see mroe of this. Your a very very good writer. You made a great introduction to a great story,

Can't wait for more,

-Robin's Wife