|Reviews for Fighting for Tomorrow|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
More please i think this fic will be fasinating when continued
| Goldielocks21 chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
Please update update update update update this could be 1 of my favorite story of your but all your story's that I read are my favorite so please please update
| WeeDevil chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
update soon love it
| Pxpi chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
Update pwease futa? My God! Lol I lovez it!
| ShadowCub chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
I hate the gay stalker!
| jab1993 chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
hahahaha arent u supposed to be dead lol jk...nice start cant wait o keep reading
| Zelda's Hero chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
This story seems interesting but I do have one slight complaint. You have almost no puncuation in this chapter. The first paragraph alone only has one period at the very end when it should have a lot more. That fact made it incredibly hard to read. You are also missing a good amount of commas. I usually don't care a whole lot about grammar but I am having a lot of trouble reading this, which upsets me because this seems like a very interesting story. I hope you will fix this and I look forward to the next chapter.
| caligurl18 chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
like the story so far, funny how emmetts' smarter than edward. also how bella is friends with some of the wolves, post more soon.
| Jay aka Jordan chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
Oh the bottom cracks me up! And I love this do this is futa? And wow I c shit getting real
| Akumagirl92 chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
I like how the story outline it funny, how you put a little twist in the story
by the way when it said who was smarter first it Carlisle, Emmett, Bella, then Edward who is next after edward?