Reviews for Mortal Thoughts
CandiedSardines chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
Very cute
Izzi89 chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Real cool story, i especially enjoyed the vivid descriptions.. It's odd, because i had just been thinking about the sad reality of people dying in the apocalypse, and this story is just so fitting to my thoughts..
I'm not particularly fond of sentimental endings, but this was well written :D
GelibeanH20 chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
Hah! I like the ending! XD
Charlie K chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
Bated breath.. memories of my own time as an insomniac, then I fell off my chair laughing. I can't quite imagine Captain almost seducing poor Snippy like that, but I can very much believe the last lines.

Nicely done.
Mystical-Maiden chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
Ah and zee Captain strikes again.

I really enjoyed reading this, you did a great job on the characters. Snippy's reaction to his dream, and Captain comforting him were well done.

I'd be very interested in seeing more.
messynotebooks chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
Woah. Nice job, you guys! This was really amazing so far and I can't wait for more
temarcia chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
The ending of this chapter is priceless. xD You got me, there - I didn't expect this. xD

The dream scene was very interesting, and rather creepy - well done.

I'm curios about this story. No idea, what's going to happen next. So, keep going. : )