Reviews for Gone
jessym1988 chapter 1 . 1/10
great Story
Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
best one-shot i've ever read!
divergentdandelion chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
Awwww I love it that is so sweet
nepalipranshu chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
I was really surprised when you said that Tris was pregnant!
Haha chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
I laughed at first from the beginning because he was all worried when he got up and he was actin all dramatic LOL but its a good story so far I'm lovin it :)
VIPemma1998 chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Are you going to continue the story? I love it!
jandjsalmon chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
oh ouch! Really really good! (and sad but good)
13halle1 chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
This story has no purpose and does not make any sense. You need to expand your thoughts and allow this story to have more emotion and make the reader think.
mercury chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
The last few sentences are haunting. Its very well written. Thank you.
Hufflelove412 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
awwww! That's sad! Good one shot though.
jamesandlils chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
oh my goodness. that was just beautiful. at first I thought this was Tobias waking up after Tris left for Erudite headquarters, but this was even better. thank you for that, really.
takeiteasycharlie chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
Hi! I think that this was really cute love how no matter how long there together or if there married and she's pregnant with his kid that he still always fears that he'll lose her it's adorable and I loved it maybe u should considering writing full stories about four and tris? I'd read it !