Reviews for Unbecoming Outtakes
MoJo40 - Ffaddward chapter 3 . 3/25/2013
Scary woman!
MoJo40 - Ffaddward chapter 2 . 3/25/2013
The part where Bella was threaten with league actions is heartbreaking.
MoJo40 - Ffaddward chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
I want this story and the outtakes part to update so much. I hope you're feeling better and start posting again soon Bookish!

Loving to re-read the outtakes even though it pisses me of that Edward walked away so "easily" while Bellas life turned in to hell.
Cullen Mascot chapter 3 . 6/19/2012
What messed up outtakes! Sickening! Very cool!

Bellas Russian roots sound scary.
Cullen Mascot chapter 3 . 6/19/2012
What messed up outtakes! Sickening! Very cool!

Bellas Russian roots sound scary.
A is for Angel chapter 3 . 5/26/2012
these entries were so sad

thank you so much for updating

cant wait for more
A is for Angel chapter 2 . 5/26/2012
what happened to bella was so heartbreaking but im glad edward is trying to make up for it

thank you for updating

cant wait for more
A is for Angel chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
mrs. bishop is one hilarious character

thanks for updating

cant wait for more outtakes
Lady Dragona chapter 3 . 5/18/2012
This shows just how crazy Carmen really is.
Lady Dragona chapter 2 . 5/18/2012
I remember these in the original story as well. I loved the one where her family had tried to protect her from her Grandfather by faking their deaths.
Lady Dragona chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
I remembered reading these int he original story. I love that you are trying to make the Cullen's more human and explain why they did what they did. Especially Edward.
TwilightMomofTwo chapter 3 . 5/7/2012
OMG. So Carmen/Maria is behind ALL of this?

She sounds more and more delusional as the entries go on...did she get her syphilis cured?
Nissa-Cullen chapter 3 . 5/7/2012
Crazy. Crazy. Crazy. I wonder if she'll get the help she needs now that she'll be in jail? Wish Edward hadn't of shot her in the knees. Apparently Esme and Bella aren't the only ones who had a psycho lusting after them.
ChocolateLover82 chapter 3 . 5/6/2012
God, Carmen is at another level of craziness. Ew.
Luvtwismut chapter 3 . 5/6/2012
Wow is she something else! Freaking scary!
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